a stirring kindles deep within
a flutter awakening a beating life
things unknown to me until we unite
a romance hidden in a dark night.


there i freestyled it >.<

---------- Post added 02-18-2013 at 09:55 PM ----------

its looking for a hiku

Maybe a different poem?

Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
How I wonder what you are.
Up above the world so high,
Like a diamond in the sky.

Originally Posted by Ivvy

a stirring kindles deep within
a flutter awakening a beating life
things unknown to me until we unite
a romance hidden in a dark night.


there i freestyled it >.<

Freestyle doesn't seem to please it. perhaps it's looking for something with a specific meter.

*writes on DD's origami heart* Love which wasn't meant to be.

I hate nights where I know I should be sleeping. But can't go to sleep. :(

oh a haiku

Before you arrived
Love was a four letter word
You gave definition

The heart begins to...purr? Something popped out!
It looks like there's still more inside.

DD get's a prize!

*is trying to think*

---------- Post added 02-18-2013 at 09:57 PM ----------

Go DD!!

its a hiku



Dawn gifts a soft touch
An invitation to love
Sweetest surrender

there is more... this is a tough heart!

Originally Posted by Ivvy

its a hiku



Dawn gifts a soft touch
An invitation to love
Sweetest surrender

The heart purrs louder and something pops out!
Congrats, Ivvy!

Hmm...there's still something else in there...

What's going on in here? *is enjoying the poetry*

Ahh this looks like it got off finally!

Hey falcon write a haiku!

---------- Post added 02-18-2013 at 10:59 PM ----------

Originally Posted by Nephila

Ahh this looks like it got off finally!

i wrestled them all here!

Originally Posted by Nephila

Ahh this looks like it got off finally!

Yep, but I feel like this round frustrated some folks. xP

'wanders back in and eyes everyone' gee.. having fun?

I forgot how I know it is three lines but... TT.TT

Originally Posted by Falconwing

I forgot how I know it is three lines but... TT.TT

google it if nothing else xD

Meh it's just a little extra "work" for some fun prizes.

Rosy pink buds
Widely open to reveal
Beautiful petals

Oops...

---------- Post added 02-18-2013 at 11:02 PM ----------

Might not want to give that bit away if I'm not allowed. ;_;

Gathering dust,
Flames seem to dim,
but the hearth still glows

A haiku is 5, 7 and 5 syllables Falcon, if you wish to write it that way it need not truly make sense.

I didn't do it right, did I?

Originally Posted by Liztress

Rosy pink buds
Widely open to reveal
Beautiful petals

Oops...

---------- Post added 02-18-2013 at 11:02 PM ----------

Might not want to give that bit away if I'm not allowed. ;_;

It feels like the heart is looking at you for a moment, then it doesn't.
Hmm...it looks like it's waiting for a haiku from someone else.

yay hiakus!