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#101
Old 01-20-2011, 04:49 AM

9/10 I don't really care for the belt I don't think its the right gold. The gold needs to be a darker one.

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#102
Old 01-20-2011, 05:51 AM

6/10

Although I admire the solid valentines theme, you seem to have almost all of the sets mainly going on and there are too many hearts for my liking. :rofl: I never was too crazy over the lanterns since they always looked out of place for valentines day and would go much better with the obakemono set. I would suggest changing your hair color to black and getting a red belt for better color balance.

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#103
Old 01-20-2011, 09:21 AM

6/10

it's a bit cluttered for my taste, and not a lot of the colour matches very well, it's all a bit too random

but i do love the hair, the colours really work to make it look like the shadows and highlights are made with dramatic lighting, which works with the background that seems to have a sun rising behind the head, and like I've said before, I love the red eyes on the purple skin, it looks very good.

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#104
Old 01-20-2011, 11:28 AM

Black Phoebe
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ANWAYS gonig to the rates
Im seeing just a simple girl going out shopping and meet with friends
Its just so simple.. but i have a feeling that ur working on a epic avi right now and waiting tell you have all the items at once so u can go BAM! epic avi
for now.. your eyebrows are just SO BIG idk why just they look BIG
7-10
sometimes we need to get back to the basics

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#105
Old 01-20-2011, 03:41 PM

the blue hair really stands out. on the one hand i really like that and think that you should incorporate in it your outfit more. on the other hand, you havnt yet and it just really stands out.

i love the armor with the belt though. that looks so manly and awesome.

if you balanced out the blue a little... like adding the blue cutie shoes and the blue space skirt, it would be epic. as it is, its pretty spiffy... but not yet epic.

7/10

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#106
Old 01-20-2011, 04:14 PM

i love yours!
all the colors are nicely balanced out and it doesn't look to cluttered.

10/10

Amazing!

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#107
Old 01-20-2011, 06:52 PM

I love it! The only thing I can suggest is more tattoo's Lol

Just to give some detail to the skin. I love demon looks on this site ^_^

8/10

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#108
Old 01-20-2011, 11:10 PM

very interesting, but i see no other pinks/yellow-orange/lavender/tan/blue/mauve/silver; it doesn't really match and i don't really see a theme... i also don't think you're cosplaying and it kind of looks like you just scrolled through your inventory and threw on some things that would layer nicely... 4/10 :( sorry T_T

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#109
Old 01-21-2011, 12:20 AM

Interesting color scheme (which I love!). I think you should add little touches of orange to match the orange in the pinwheel. I also love the fact that you didn't use black anywhere on your avatar. Yay!

Taking out the wings would definately be a plus on my list, as well.

8 / 10

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#110
Old 01-21-2011, 12:28 AM

(Don't be sorry chronic ^_^ a 4 is much better than I thought. And I bought everything you see here. Not just randomly picked. Its strategic xD))

I love love love your hair color. And your Avi as a whole. The only think I could suggest is to add something more to the bottom half of your avi. It looks skinny compared to the top. 9/10

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#111
Old 01-21-2011, 12:55 AM

7/10

I actually like this, my only suggestions being to remove the cupcakes and, if possible, to get a brighter/not so dull jacket-thing :3

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#112
Old 01-21-2011, 01:06 AM

8/10 its looking nicee and pretty and love the background too, liking how the is blue in the background to manage the blue on the middle even if its different shade

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#113
Old 01-21-2011, 02:34 AM

6, maybe 7 out of 10

I like the colour scheme a lot, but it's just so cluttered

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#114
Old 01-21-2011, 07:42 AM

the green hair matches really well with the necklace, should sash and cloth belt... but i feel there is a lot of room for improvement, so i am guessing that you aren't totally finished yet... but i suggest maybe adding a third color... that might bring some more depth to the avi... definitely need something for the head and maybe a green layer near the feet area... also something on the arms.... this is where the third color will come in handy... it'll give you more options... 5/10

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#115
Old 01-21-2011, 08:11 AM

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Oww this avi is so.. SO very balance
and somehow u where able to find exact colors that match with each other
that part is so very hard!
i kinda wish thow you would go with a bright green for ur eyes
everything is so light where ur eyes are so very very dark
so my rate is 7-10
make them eyes shine!

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#116
Old 01-21-2011, 08:23 AM

9/10
I really like this avatar, the theme is solid and the colours are balanced. The only issue I have is the legs, they don't seem to fit in with the overall look you have, I would suggest maybe silver anklets instead of the legwarmers and leaving out the stockings? I think the demon ankle wings should provide enough red...

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#117
Old 01-21-2011, 09:38 AM


I have no idea what the theme is? XDDD?

Hmm, could use a bit more of the pale gold at the waist area, and the lavender sock don't really fit.
It feels not quite... right yet, like you're still in the works on polishing your avi, but that it'll brighten into something amazing when your done. 6.5/10

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#118
Old 01-21-2011, 10:28 AM

oooh very pretty~ i love all the purple and gold, and the ray gun is superb ;) 10/10 from me. its very lovely

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#119
Old 01-21-2011, 12:51 PM

Oh, nice new avi chronic!

I am going to say off the bat that I love the colours you are using. Its not othen you would see these colours paried together. Although the red of the pin bugs me a little because its a shade off, but that's just me being anal. I also love how simple your avi is. Very pretty.

I am going to give you an 8/10. Why 8? Because although I love how plain your avi is, I feel like these is more that you can add. Might I suggest adding the Canary Shoulder Puffs? It will add some yellow to your arms. I would also suggest perhaps adding the White Gumball Chocker. Those are just my suggestions love!

Very cute avi :D

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#120
Old 01-21-2011, 05:32 PM

10/10

there is nothing wrong with your outfit. and there is everything right about it. the yumeh fan girl theme, the layering, the balance, the items used, the flow, its fabulous.

the only think i would do slightly different is the facial expression. i would close the eyes and use the eye in the fox CI together so that your face does this XD. But thats just for official fan girl moments. the "how are you guys doing tonight?" "AHH!!!!!!!!!" moments.

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#121
Old 01-21-2011, 06:31 PM

9.5 out of 10, again, only becuase I don't give 10's. I love the layering, the theme, and the colors are extremely well-matched.
Very VERY nicely done!

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#122
Old 01-21-2011, 06:46 PM

9.5/10
i think you could go without the grass. but other than that its totally amazing!

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#123
Old 01-21-2011, 06:57 PM

i recommend adding another colour, just because right now its kinda boring and pretty simple. i do really like it and its a great base to start with. i just think it needs more. like yellow, or orange or teal or green or pink or purple.. you get the idea. another colour.

i do love the assassin feel to it though. its very ninja! and thats great.

6/10

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#124
Old 01-21-2011, 08:29 PM

I dont wana rate, i wanna get on ur head peiece and start signing
IM ON A BOAT! IM ON A BOAT! take a good hard look at the mothering f... BOAT!
loving the glases too, very VERy nerdish sceintest and such
10-10

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#125
Old 01-21-2011, 09:14 PM

very solid theme! i love it! its great, it all matches and its gorgeous. the only complaint i have is that your shoes are silver and not white, but thats being too anal about it i think. so 10/10 :)

 



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