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Old 11-24-2008, 10:33 AM

Here is where I will be posting some of my poems. Feel free to give me any feedback
Thanks.
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Fighter
Door shut tight,
Trying to avoid the fight,
Music blaring,
I’m not caring,
About the inane things you fuss

Every day it is the same thing
Do you know how much pain your fighting dose bring?
Do you know how your words sting?
You act like you’re the families queen or king,
What makes you have that right?

Every night it is another fight.
Why must you always be right?
You use to be my light.
What happened to those days?

When did every thing change?
When you become the ruler of our family?
When did you become so better?
When did you become so cruel?
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Hope
Hope for the Best,
It’s all a test.
If you are true,
God will help you through.

Things May look bleak,
Making your spirit weak,
But all is not lost,
Just hold on to your hope and faith no matter the cost
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I Will Pray For you

When things look bad,
When life makes you sad,
I will pray for you.

If life gets you down,
If a true friend can’t be found,
I will pray for you.

No matter what the cost,
No matter if all is lost,
I will pray for you.
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Into The Night
Come with me into the night.
The werewolves plea you don’t,
But who cares what those mutts want.
Do what your heart tells you is right.

Come with me into the night.
The moon shall be our only guide
Alone down darken streets we shall stride,
With our never ending love a right

Come with me into the night.
Upon the evil we shall feast,
Like a lion or some other jungle beast,
As we have shared our love tonight.

Come with me into the night.
By day in each others arms we shall sleep,
And for the loss of your love I will never have to weep
OH please come with me into the night.
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About the poems

Into The night was written for a class I’m taking.
Hope and I Will Pray For You were written for my grandfather, who was recently in the hospital for a while.
I don’t know where fighter came from.

 


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