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There isn't that much going in my life, it's the people around me the brings me life, something to fight, something to wait, something that will get me excited. It's mostly about people that my life is about, my emotions that run through beneath this shallow skin of mine. These poems I write is what I feel, at that current day and time. The situation that surrounds me will emulate into words, to better explain what I truly feel. And to vent out my anger, sadness, deppression, happiness, love and life.

Also, please do not post your own poem in this thread. Make your own thread please- its not that hard. Commentaries are an OK.

Thank you for all your consideration.
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Searching

What are you,
what are me?
Tonights the night that will define the beauty within me,
Sometimes I see it
sometimes I don't
And yet I'm still here,
wondering us both.
We can't always see,
the reflection we want to see,
For the mirror shall break and shall our soul separate.
What are you,
what are me?
Tonights the night that will define the beauty within me.

You

I look at you
wondering why
your beauty charms me
in a blink of an eye

I cherish thee
your individuality,
for your simplicity
intoxicates me.

I ask myself
everyday
is it your innocence day by day
that drives me wild
like I'm alive
although it seems
I'll never know why.

Forever long
forever more,
Please be mine
for soon
for sure
I'll love you dearly
like my only one
as long as we'll be forever one.

As much dismay
we're too opposed
Since you are but one
and I am for both.
I look at things
differently
For you are one
my dear
Q.

Egotistical Naive Child

One hundred times
One hundred days
I shall ignore
your ignorant complains.

Your ploy of darkness
for your own self gain
shall halt before me
you ignorant fake.

I will not fall into
your dramatic plays
for all you want
is attention and fame.

Sometimes I wonder
who can be dumb enough
to think that this
can fool anyone?!

Stupidity falls before you
like an immature child
waiting to be pampered
like the prince of pine.

Your gone

I can run into my room
I can cry all of my tears
But I cant bring you back
Cant do anything
But stand here thinking..
What did I do?
I lost my love
for god knows when
I want to hear you say
that you love me
I want you to hold me
I want to see you blush..
at every little thing I say
I want to have those
little 'I love you more' arguments
Cant God see I miss you?
Cant God bring you back?
I feel like nothing without you
you compleat me...


You make me feel importent..
I make a fool outta myself
every time I talk to you
but you still love me...
can you hear my heart breaking?
bursting into peices?
your gone...
and I cant do a thing

Stripped from the sources of your life
Always knew that you were insight
And sometimes I wonder
that you'll never know
I love you...

I think of you as though you were mine
Even though they take as theres
Someday, you and I will be
together and ever
I love you...



Song lyrics...

One day, you came up my door.
And told me, there is no more.
I never felt so alone
in my life.
I never to stood a chance
in this life.

I feel so alone
like the mourners grave,
sitting by the grass,
waiting everyday.

Come to me my love,
Hold my hand,
like your daughters' sun.

Cme to me my love,
Hold my hand,
clenched in it
forever,
is my heart.

I feel so alone,
like the mourners grave,
sitting by the grass,
waiting everyday...

hold my hand,
since it holds the key
to my heart
forever thee.

You love me like no other
and yet you sit and wonder
about yourself and who you are
what is it and what is are

I came so close in liking you
But who am I to know you?
Communication is all I need
It is not that hard to dealt with

Come with me and lets join arms
at a greater purpose to making love

It is sweet and it is kind
It is passion, it will sublime
however you will need more than that
for me to love you just the way like that.

You (Version II)

The very first day that I saw you
My heart jumped like a soul to the sky
Floating, exploring like the summer skies
Shaky, conscious like my desires.

I want to get to know you
and I want to be like you
and yet you just give me simple gestures that I like.

Now its been too long
and I have found someone knew
Someone better I do not know
but still it is a new.

I feel like I lost somebody
and yet you'll always be a part of me.
You changed me so bad
like a fire's rig
dont forget about me
my sweet lovely.

Crushed at the bottomless pit
Quite unhappy to myself
Singing thoughts at no end
but all I hear is noise
Creeping, crawling
ghosts in the past
attached to their wings
are dust of sad
Fast, complacent, construde, despair
feelings far
feelings aware.

Where is the Art, Ghosts?

The art is gone
crying itself
to whoever it meets
in the shadow's night

Trying to meet
the ghosts began
to scream infidelities
to someones known

The moon
naked to its eye
looks at your tender skin
through your screeching bones
searching,
screaming infidelities

You (Version III)

Blonde and blue
you are
naked eyes
in your innocence
strong, witted
fragile and sweet
My heart beats
second by second
longing to meet.

My fingers tremble
as I hear your voice
singing deliberately
my joy, oh joy.
My happiness are your eyes
melting me... oh how can I?

I feel ashamed
for creating this,
I feel sadness,
not having this,
I feel crushed,
knowing not having you,
for you are you,
and I am I.
And yet, I feel hapiness,
for finding you.
For you have opened
my eyes with joy,
excitement
enduring
for the days to toy.

Aching Heart

My heart is bleeding, my body is bursting

I can’t hold on anymore

It’s been way too long

I’ve been bottling it all up

And Im tired of it all.

Enough. Peace. Happiness.

That’s all I need.

But not really…

I need more, we want more….

Nothings enough anymore.

The One (part one)

You came along,

just in time,

to hold my hand,

and become mine.

I feel your heart,

beating fine,

like a glass

of beautiful smiles.

Call my name,

call it true,

hearts forever,

true and blue.

Not that I meant,

that I was blue,

but if it were true,

it wouldn't be with you.

:)

Nobody but me (lonely days in life)

I cried so hard today.
It feels as if my eyes are burning.
They are red and swollen,
And each tear brings it pain.

I shouldn’t be sad.
I should be glad.
I have everything in the world you see,
I have people around me that I love so dearly.

I have my magical knight,
Who saves me with delight.
I have my sister of twin,
Ready to conquer the world without fear.

But sometimes its not enough,
for the mountain is so steep.
I cant climb it alone.
Im so alone.

Nobody knows but me.

Water

I feel like
a fire bird
phoenix
swimming in
the cold mutable sea

Splish Splash
Splish Splash

Making wonders

Drifting back to me

The Sea

I am a water sign
I am the sea
I am the ocean
drifting
swimming

with all shapes and sizes
forming to your desires

I am a water sign

The deepest of the deep

Nothing shallow, nothing hollow
For your eyes are what you see
So incredible
So unbelievable

But I believe
I believe
that is my motto
I believe.

I am a water sign.

Breath Mandarin

Breath Mandarin
Careful not to let it spill
for every puff you take
is as genuine as cake.

Your free as a bird,
attempting to swerve
every plain you've been
every grass you take.

Fly be free
Run around, streak.
For the grapes you take
will be cannibis free.

Jump, don't hold back,
everything, don't set back.
It's good to let it out,
vent your life,
don't put out.

But don't over do it.
For you are one fragile sea,
glass shall break,
air will fray,
jump to see,
the bird's eye view
Then Flee.

My Asylum

I feel alone.
I feel broken.
I feel incomplete.
I feel...my asylum.

Where are you?

I like your work. It all has a really calm feel for me. The reading flows and the way I seem to read it in my head almost sopunds like a voice from a dream. Really cool actualy. :D

Originally Posted by Elixssam

I like your work. It all has a really calm feel for me. The reading flows and the way I seem to read it in my head almost sopunds like a voice from a dream. Really cool actualy. :D

Why thank you! I've never had someone criticize my work. Thanks, this means a lot to me! >w<

Originally Posted by Jax

Why thank you! I've never had someone criticize my work. Thanks, this means a lot to me! >w<

Your welcome xD

Originally Posted by Jax

Egotistical Naive Child

One hundred times
One hundred days
I shall ignore
your ignorant complains.

Your ploy of darkness
for your own self gain
shall halt before me
you ignorant fake.

I will not fall into
your dramatic plays
for all you want
is attention and fame.

Sometimes I wonder
who can be dumb enough
to think that this
can fool anyone?!

Stupidity falls before you
like an immature child
waiting to be pampered
like the prince of pine.

Goodbye Forever

I wrote this when I was angry at you,
but now I feel like I don't need you.
Thanks for the laughs,
thanks for the bless,
nothing compares you like anyone else.

But now I moved on,
from anger and hate,
to sadness then happiness,
like anyone's bait.

Don't crawl back to me when youre all alone,
since you left me,
with just shadows to soak.

Back then, back where
when it was just you and me,
Things were good
and yet a void fills me.

Now I know,
that it was just a blink,
like a fink, in anyone's dream.

You were fake,
and that you couldnt take,
the friendship takes more than this.

But did you know,
that I really cared,
that my pride was nothing,
and it was just a glare?

I guess that's where,
I made a mistake,
that helped this friendship turned into flakes,
like a muster of darkness,
into this garden,
that was burned to ashes...what a fake!

My heart beated,
my heart sickened,
I felt blue,
I didn't feel true.

I was hiding it from everybody,
since it seemed that no one truly understood.
Until one day,
when I lashed out,
snapped to extinction,
and poured everything out.

...that is the story
of this friendship with you,
how it started like stars,
and ended to screws.

You are only to blame,
I tried to follow you,
so you can be back to me,
like it was just me and you.

You were something,
to me at least,
but then you turned your back on me,
like you did to everyone else's pleas.

I guess this is where it ends,
with no mutual end,
good bye my friend...

The One (part two)

Is this Love that I feel?
It seems so surreal,

and I never knew that
it was this strong to feel
this connection of dreams
that yields to deal

that Love is true,
and so are you
for you are the one,
and I feel you.


My heart jumps when I think of you,
And seriously!
I'm not lying to you!

I never expected,
that you were the one,
when I first saw you,
at a party at one.

I did not even feel
an instant connection,
probably because
i didnt think I could stand out
from your perception.

But now we both now,
that this Love that we feel,
is mutual and true,
like a dream of bliss.

With you in my heart,
all my pain can go away,
the scars of reality,
will slowly drift away.

You will show me light,
you will show me life,
You will bring me happiness,
You will yield to rise.

To become true to me,
Like I always wished it could be.

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