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Old 04-20-2008, 02:23 PM


X'D I hope I did alright~

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Old 04-20-2008, 04:00 PM

I have some questions, first does it count of if my drabble is really a poem?
Second its a nature themed poem, but it is a bit macabre...

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#53
Old 04-20-2008, 04:44 PM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: Dj vu of the furry kind?
Selected theme: Critters
Entry:
It was such a beautiful day that Vivica decided to go for a stroll in the forest. Once she arrived the first thing she spotted was a rabbit. Naturally she followed it; curiosity did get the best of her. As she dwelled deeper into the forest she heard all sorts of sounds. Every step she took, she hummed along to the birds' songs. In tune with the birds she continued to sing along, twirling around the trees. Until she came to a halt.

Vivica's eyes widened when she saw all the animals of the forest, right in front of her.



This was sooooo difficult for mee! I'm surprised I actually had it reach the 100 word mark, because seriously I write too much for my own good. I know it's cheesy, but I couldn't help myself. The fact that I got to incorporate one of my original characters, makes me happy. :P

I also wanted to know... If I wanted to submit another piece, do I just edit my original post... or post another reply? D: Sorry for bugging so much. This newb just wants to participate in all she can! :D

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#54
Old 04-20-2008, 06:36 PM

can i not rap all the themes together? i think it'd be so beautiful if i could :S

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Old 04-20-2008, 07:30 PM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: Madoneko
Selected theme: Respect
Entry:
We may forget to take out the trash, and maybe most of us eat too much as well. We can be stupid at times, and often we neglect the fact that this is your house, and you're trying to live here too. We can be ungrateful moreover, because we don't realize that you're the only one willing to take us in on such short notice. We have been a storm crashing through your home, an invasion, and you're probably sick of us by now! Nonetheless, you let us stay here, and for that, thank you. Thank you for having us.



I love writing drabbles! :D I hope you like reading ym entry as much as I like writing it. XD Good luck to everyone else, as well! Happy Earth Days~<333

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Old 04-20-2008, 08:24 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Urboros
I have some questions, first does it count of if my drabble is really a poem?
Second its a nature themed poem, but it is a bit macabre...

<.<U

You can make a poem. ^^ Just make sure it's exactly 100 words! :D

And as long as it's nature themed, you're fine. ^^ Doesn't have to be all rainbows and ponies. xD

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can i not rap all the themes together? i think it'd be so beautiful if i could :S

Feel free to! :)


Quote:
Originally Posted by girliekeyblade

I also wanted to know... If I wanted to submit another piece, do I just edit my original post... or post another reply? D: Sorry for bugging so much. This newb just wants to participate in all she can! :D

Please post a new post if you'd like to submit another entry. ^^ You're free to submit as many as you'd like. ;)



UPDATE: From this post on, I will be using RoughDraft to check your word count. I've learned that Microsoft Word can inflate your word count. If you've qualified prior to this post, you're fine.

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Old 04-20-2008, 09:16 PM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: Californiaswimmergirl
Selected theme: Conservation/Respect
Entry:
You're walking down the sidewalk eating a candy bar. You finish and now you have a wrapper left. You throw it on the ground. Someone else will throw it out. Is that true though? Is there really someone that spends their day picking up trash and throwing it out properly? If so tell me one person that does this. You can't? Well then what's going to happen to the wrapper? Why it's going to go down the sewers and wash into the ocean and pollute it and then maybe some poor animal will choke on your trash. Throw it out.


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Old 04-20-2008, 09:19 PM


Woot! Thanks for the entries! :D I've updated the list with every post before this one. ^^

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Old 04-20-2008, 09:33 PM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: Californiaswimmergirl
Selected theme: Nature/Critters
Entry:
You step outside, into the crisp, colorful, autumn day.
Orange, brown, and red leaves litter the ground.
People, rake them away.
The wind blows by you whispering in its strange tongue.
Birds sit in the trees singing a song.
Whistling away their worries.
A chipmunk scurries under your feet.
Ants march,
Their food on their backs.
Two squirrels chase each other up a tree,
And across the lawn.
A shy deer peeks out from the bushes,
Spots you,
And then scampers away.
Envision this again.
Only without, the animals.
This is our world after pollution and global warming.
Do something.



((Is it okay it's in poem form/like a poem?))

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Old 04-20-2008, 09:40 PM


Yes, poetry is accepted. ^_^

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Old 04-20-2008, 09:42 PM


Okay. :D

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#62
Old 04-20-2008, 11:59 PM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: Urboros
Selected theme: Nature
Entry:
Ungulate terra
We are parasitic by nature,
Living upon a large fertile land,
Rhinoceros that is earth,
Eroding away as time progresse, the creature that was once in its prime,
The decay of the rhino is anything but laconic in reality,
The creature ambles about, close to kicking the bucket.
As we continue are sheltered existences, in its ears.
Whispering factious nuances of encouragement,
The end is coming near.
In the closing stages we shall defenestrate our calm and little logic,
As we flee our home for a new one to deface,
We are ticks the blood and life suckers.



no ponies and rainbows here,
its verse that everyday should be an earth day.

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#63
Old 04-21-2008, 02:53 AM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: Spunkifull
Selected theme: Critters
Entry:This is a story
A story about the Narwhal
Narwhals are really cool
They're like; a mix between a whale and unicorn
And that's pretty cool
They live up in the Arctic
Or maybe the Antarctic;
I don't know, I live the Sonoran Desert
But they're still mighty cool
And supposedly magic
That's cool too
It's kind of like
If unicorns a long long time ago were about to become extinct
And they moved into the water
And slowly mutated into Narwhals
And that's why you don't see unicorns
Because the Narwhals ARE the unicorns
You see? It makes COMPLETE TOTAL sense.


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Old 04-21-2008, 05:06 AM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: woohoohelloppl
Selected theme: Respect
Entry: Have you ever walked along the beach finding a trash all over the place? Or maybe even the streets? People can't just leave their trash there for others to pick up! If you respect the Earth, you may be rewarded. BUT, if you don't and decide to litter, you will have to pay a high price. You see, Earth Day was created for one specific reason. It's purpose is to encourage people to help and respect the earth. You can help by throwing away your trash or even recycling! Respecting the earth can be very rewarding if you just try.

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Old 04-21-2008, 05:10 AM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: Blondheart
Selected theme: Critters
Entry:
Two fluffy kitties watching the world go by through an open a window. Wishing we could chase butterflies or climb the tree where the birds perch and chirp at us. Such a big beautiful world, sun and clouds in the sky, grass and dirt to roll in! Too bad there is glass between it and us.

Ears perk up, we hear a sound. A familiar feminine voice calling our names. Sliding glass moves, opening the portal to the back yard. We can see the glorious sun warmed dirt! The afternoon lazily spent in the sun. It's good to be us!


You better check it and make sure I have the right amount of words, this one was tough!

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Old 04-21-2008, 05:21 AM


I've updated the entries prior to this post. ^^ If you don't see your entry listed, check your PMs. You should have a note about your qualifications.

Thanks for entering, guys! If you feel the need to enter more, please, be my guest. xD

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Old 04-21-2008, 05:26 AM

Are you saying we can enter more than once? O_O

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Old 04-21-2008, 05:46 AM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: ...loading
Selected theme: love and/or respect
Entry:
A little girl asked her father "Daddy... what are angels?" Her father smiled. "Angels are everyday people... the lady next door, the poor men on the street, people who make our world safe." Replied the father "People who help you when you have a problem, who give without a care, they are the angels." He said and kissed her head then left the room turning out the light. The little girl thought of it for a moment then folded her hands and prayed "Dear lord..." She said her voice getting heavy with sleep "It seems you gave me an angel after all."


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Old 04-21-2008, 05:48 AM

My Ode to Nature!
Name: Enzeru
Selected theme: Critters (although conservation would also work)

Entry: As I flew over the land and surveyed my surroundings I began to wonder what happened to this place. It was once a lush green jungle full of trees and other birds. The humans left us seed and water and all was good. Now there are no humans, no birds, no anything. I am the last of the bluebirds. Soon there will be no more. The air is thick with unnatural fumes. I awake in my bed and realize this was a dream. A terrible dream of what could be. I feel the need to tell everyone what has happened.


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Old 04-21-2008, 05:51 AM

I might enter again... XP

Not sure. :mrgreen:

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Old 04-21-2008, 05:53 AM

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Are you saying we can enter more than once? O_O

Yup! You can enter as many times as you'd like, but you can only win once. ^^ But! Every entry you submit gets a lottery ticket for the raffle. So if you don't win here, you might win there. :3

*goes to check and update the entries*

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Old 04-21-2008, 05:56 AM

The bee and panda sets are cyoot! :mrgreen:


Mine isn't that good...

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Old 04-21-2008, 07:05 AM


I love all the entries. xD

Silly woohoo. <3 Yours was very nice and very true!

Anyways, everyone should be in the entries post and listed in the raffle. ^^

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#74
Old 04-21-2008, 08:32 AM

o i made poem .... but theres no poetry contest...i don't now if i can enter beacuse it has to be in the theme. i need to update it to fit the rules

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Old 04-21-2008, 01:09 PM

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o i made poem .... but theres no poetry contest...i don't now if i can enter beacuse it has to be in the theme. i need to update it to fit the rules

It's okay if it's a poem. I made one too.

 


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