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Old 08-04-2015, 03:09 AM

I feel my world crashing down
I feel my soul dying with every breath
The waves crash in, I begin to drown
Water fills my lungs, I feel my arms stretch
Looking for help, searching for salvation
That is never to come

My life is fading fast,
As I blink the world grows dimmer
How long will I last?
I feel my life becoming slimmer

I feel something eat at my heart,
Distorting everythjng I am
It's tearing me apart,
Will I ever be the same?

I feel myself dying,
Slowly, I feel myself disappearing
As I start my last bout of crying
I know I was never to be...

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Old 09-17-2015, 04:22 PM

thank you
im glad im not the only one who writes these kinda poems
as for a title, thats the hardest part about writing
take all the factors an see where they lead u...ur poem sounds like a dying unwanted soul thats crying out for help even tho its in alot of pain.

 


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