01-26-2012, 07:40 AM
I thought this was beautiful, to be truthful. I thought it flowed very nicely. And it made me happy and made me smile because it made me think of my boyfriend. ^_^
I really enjoy poetry that makes me feel good, as I am unable to write pleasant poetry. My poetry is and always has been very dark material that I can only compose when I'm on an emotional high or low. :sweat: Pleasant poetry is just....so fresh. Its unknown territory for me, and I find it very enjoyable to read. As I said, your little poem flowed very well, and it is one of the better poems that I've read in a while. And as Rozalyne said, the meaning was clear and that isn't as easy to do as it looks.
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