just a thread with a cool name to some up my poems. My poems will either be epic or an epic fail. I will say whether or not i think the poem is in epic fail.

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To give the one you love
To someone else,
To show them you love her more
By doing so,
To understand why
She wants to go,
Without seeing the pain
She is causing you,
Is the strongest thing
That I have ever seen,
For your love is a
Double-edge sword

But your strength was only your
Pain hardening you,
Changing you into a new person on outside
But killing you on the inside
For you had given up,
Succumb to your depression
Forgotten about the outside world
…and me
This poem is about My best friend who started going out with this girl it lasted for 4 years. 5 months ago he found out that she was cheating on him all four years. After finding out he sunk into a deep depression. 4 months later he committed suicide. He was only 17. I tried to help him but In the end he forgotten about everything and overdose. I regret not ever telling him how i really felt about him. This poem is my veiw of it. I consider this one of my epics (this poem is also on gaionline)

It's great. Have you considered writing more? Because I think you should.

I honestly like it. Especially the second half of the poem! :3