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Old 02-21-2010, 04:53 PM

I hate when the Sun shines
for all but me.
I hate when your heart beats
for her, not me.

I hate the darkness
with hopeful voice I say,
as shadows close in
''Come what may''

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Old 02-22-2010, 06:14 PM

You can turn of the light
and still I will see.
You can burn all the bridges
You can shoot me down,
I will stand up and be proud.

You can throw a punch
You can tear me down,
I will stand up and still be proud.

I know you hate me
I know you do,
You can do voodoo
but either way you can't hurt me
because unlike you
I have hope

Last edited by Rose Pearl; 02-24-2010 at 11:41 PM..

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Old 02-24-2010, 07:40 PM

I really love your style and how you're succinct with your writing.
You have great way of really driving the point home and getting your feelings across.
Please keep up the good work!

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Old 02-24-2010, 11:40 PM

thank you.You may read in near future style that is not seen and that is me and only me.thank you for the support

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See all the green
in the world around.
I see the red
that is on the ground.
See the sapphire blue
See the cold ice
I see the light
and it is so bright.

I see the envy
I see jealousy
I see blood.


In this colorful world
it would be nice to see white,grey,black

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Old 02-25-2010, 12:07 AM

I've gone ahead and moved this into our Poetry subforum. :yes:

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Old 02-25-2010, 12:31 AM

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thank you.You may read in near future style that is not seen and that is me and only me.thank you for the support
I certainly hope so!
You're very welcome.

The newest poem is lovely. Sometimes it would be nice to see things with naivety, not noticing their true colors but accepting them at face value. Reality can be harsh, can't it?

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Old 02-25-2010, 11:00 AM

that is what I am aiming for.To show the harsh reality.

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Old 02-25-2010, 10:02 PM

I see the deep
I see dark abyss
I see new dawn coming.
In the dark
there is always light.
There is always sound
You cannot hit the ground.
Like Alice in that hole
chasing rabbit.

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Old 03-04-2010, 08:38 PM

Sea splashing,
Earth shaking,
Fire breathing,
is it maybe
Global Warming

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Old 08-07-2013, 07:34 PM

Fluttering bumblebees,
green grass grows.
Spring time is coming
and I feel so warm.

My heart is warm
it beats faster then usual,
Sun bring happiness
into a dim lit room.

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Old 08-08-2013, 12:26 PM

all so pretty

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Old 08-10-2013, 07:20 AM

thank you hunni :D

 


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