I started with this and i couldn't quite finish it, What do you all think any how?



she was over me, with her hair draping down past her face. Her eyes staring back at mine and with a long and deep gaze she closed her eyes. I asked her why, and with her's still closed she said "no reason, i just wanted a mental picture, you look so gorgeous right now" as her hand was gently caressing where my hip met my thigh.

I think this is a bit short for the primary Lit forum if this is all you're going to write. I'll move it to the Drabbles section for you.