its genius that poem is.

i'd love to see it and than show it to my best friend :D

or share it on tumblr saying its not my work its a friends. but i shall take all the rage! muhahaha

You'd love torturing people with that huh? XD

Sorry I've been a little spotty ya'll :C Finals are next week which meant papers and portfolios were due this week @ w@

I'm glad to see that the conversation was still going though!! :D

@ Poet: Enjambment can be a really useful tool when used properly. I know I'm a bit of an abuser sometimes :blush: But it can really add a sense of urgency to a piece.
because thoughts
just
come
as they can and sometimes lines become a little more
cohesive.

Sometimes poems should have a shaky rhythm imho.

but I also think all poetry should be read aloud rather than read silently so sometimes the line breaks are merely to show where I would break something off if I were reading it out loud.

But when it's a string of single words it can get very frustrating.
I don't like reading poetry like Captain Kirk