@ Wingless...lol thats great, and a web comic?

@ Ivvy - It looks good to me. The curve of the girl's cheek is a little odd. So is her nose. I think her lips may be down a little too low. One of her shoulders looks a little too big and I think the boobs may be a bit low, though I can't tell if that's just a style thing or not. And her legs are getting small too fast.

@ Wingless - o3o; No kidding.
You got a webcomic?

mmhmm =3

I'm running a tad late on my current one XD

cause it was finals week =P

it's about a world where the humans have started eradicating all other races and what happens centuries into the future =3

it's really long and complicated X3


would you like a link? ;D X3

@ Wing - Sure. =D

theopression.smackjeeves.com

I haven't gotten to the good parts yet though X3

If you are talking about the first on it is a drawing I did of a friend in drag. >.< So I made it a little off so iy wouldn't be too fiminin. lol.

@ Ivvy - I was talking about the second one.
On the first one, I don't think the folds are quite right. Folds aren't just one big bold line, they are small little lines. You've improved a lot on that. The lower leg that's showing is too short and his butt is too pointy. His shoulder is too high again, too. Chest lines aren't in the right place. And in a shirt like that, I don't think that his chest would stick out quite so much

Thank you for the constuvtive crittisism. I enjoy hearing ones that actually say what needs work, instead of I just don't like it...lol

Well I am off to get coffee, be back in about and hour and a half, hope to chat with you again soon.

lol I never understand people who complain about artwork and then don't give reasons why XD

tata! coffee = yay!

@ Ivvy - I try to help artists when I can. I can't really spot small mistakes, since I'm not an artist myself. But I've seen art and the critism other people have given on it, so I have a vague idea on what to suggest.

@ Wingless - Your lines are really blurry. I would suggest that you try to make them straight and neater so that its more appealing to look at.
And you should work on your anatomy, also. Take the following image for example.
http://theopression.smackjeeves.com/...49322/symbols/
Work a little on the hand. Hands are hell for everyone, I know, but you gotta pratice. Also, the way her upper body and hips connect to her torso is really unnatural. Also, if her ears were really where you put them, they would be attacked to her cheek. They should be a little farther back. Probably higher, too. They should line up with the eyes. And would people with wings sleep on their back? It seems a little painful, but I'm nto really sure about this one. It just seems like they'd sleep on their side or tummy.

Should I re title the thread "Anna's art help" ? xD
I've no problem with it, of course.

Originally Posted by Dystopia

@ Ivvy - I try to help artists when I can. I can't really spot small mistakes, since I'm not an artist myself. But I've seen art and the critism other people have given on it, so I have a vague idea on what to suggest.

@ Wingless - Your lines are really blurry. I would suggest that you try to make them straight and neater so that its more appealing to look at.
And you should work on your anatomy, also. Take the following image for example.
http://theopression.smackjeeves.com/...49322/symbols/
Work a little on the hand. Hands are hell for everyone, I know, but you gotta pratice. Also, the way her upper body and hips connect to her torso is really unnatural. Also, if her ears were really where you put them, they would be attacked to her cheek. They should be a little farther back. Probably higher, too. They should line up with the eyes. And would people with wings sleep on their back? It seems a little painful, but I'm nto really sure about this one. It just seems like they'd sleep on their side or tummy.

yeah, i got too lazy to finish reinking with my friend's tablet and she was getting kinda antsy cause I had had it the whole day =P

yeah i have so much probelm with hands >_< i've been working on them though and they've started to get better =3

yeah, i know i screwed up the ears alot DX
I have issues with ears XP

She has a very comfy bed ^_^ X3

Ithir: It should be the "Anna's Art Help Raveraverave" XD

xD; PFFT. Sure, if you want. "Now with 80% less asspatting!"

Phew, done tetrising D:

Anatomy is a hard thing to master. I have pretty crappy anatomy in my drawings but it may improve slightly since I am taking an art class for fun in school right now.

yay art classes! =D

oh yeah wingless should tetris XD

for AP Art though i usually do just graphic deseign stuff cause it's easier and comes out so much better XD

Done.

And I suppose there's a prize on page 50. Just to reward the awesomeness.

lol X3

oh hey! where'd TKC get that strawberry tail? =D

it's so pretty X3

-blink-
It's not a strawberry. D: It's a devil tail. Fear it, rawr!

it looks like a strawberry to me! =D

-noms tail-

i'm loling at the title XD

Yea. Way to ruin it.
It's still almost pointy. D<

it tastes like a strawberry! =D

No, it tastes like Brown Evil. D<

And where did Anna go?

Oh page 50 is coming up quickly, that's nice ^^

- stares at TKCs tail -
It does look just like a strawberry!!!
I must get some chocolate to dip it into and then it will be super yummy <33333

@Ithir: Lolol you must have scared Anna away with your title change!
She doesn't want to take on helping many people with their artwork xD

Oh good god. D:
We're killing the 'I'm a sexy devil' vibe I've been giving off all event!

I know it has some black fuzz, but just think of it as evil dust!

Hey, she gave me permission.

Lolol it is long dead now >D
Evil dust?! That's a pretty far stretch since it looks exactly like strawberry leaves!

Oh I didn't read that then xP