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Old 07-27-2014, 11:03 PM

Here are some of my poems, please tell me what you think about them.

I See You in the Moonlight

I see you in the moonlight
I hear your voice in the wind
I feel your tears in the rain
I taste the touch of your lips in blood

Beautiful is what I call you,
Sweet is what you call me,
Many people think your dead,
But I will never give up on you,
My love

You see me in the sunlight
You hear me in breeze
You feel my tears in the water
You taste my lips in heaven

I cry for you every night,
I pay for your safe return,
I tell people your still here,
I love you and I will never give up on you,
My love

I know where you are
And cry out your name as I die
But the simple fact was that
Your gone and in heaven
And now I’m coming to join you

---------- Post added 07-27-2014 at 07:04 PM ----------

Earth Fell

I'm all alone
Everyone has left
The world is gone

Heaven vanished
Hell consumed us
Angels have forsaken us
Demons use us

God slept
The world perished
Lucifer conquered
Angels fell

Demons rose
God was murdered
The knife held
By the son

Sons of God
Betrayed the father
Daughters of God
Taken advantage of

A ball of fire
Consumes the Earth
Heaven and Hell
Vanish along with it

Nothing is left
Small rocks come together
A new Earth, formed
With a better chance

---------- Post added 07-27-2014 at 07:05 PM ----------

I Loved Him…

I loved him
But he was taken
He never knew how
Much I cared for him

There was a smile
On my face when I saw him
But once I was home
I cried and became depressed

I never talk to him
To keep myself from
Crying around my friends

I never got the chance
That most get
I never got the Chance
To show him how much
He meant to me

I loved him
But he was taken
So I never knew him

---------- Post added 07-27-2014 at 07:05 PM ----------

I Killed

I look up at the moon
To forget everything
Only to look back down
And see blood and tears
Around me

I used to run from it
I didn't know why I saw that
Intil in the darkness I looked
At my hands only to see blood
I didn't know who's it was

I ran until the moon was no more
I ran until the darkness was gone
I ran until the sun came
I ran till I saw the light

I then relized I had killed him
I had killed the one I loved
I didn't understand why
Until I relized I had killed myself

I kileed the two people
The two pleople that everyone missed
I now regret what I did
I want to live again

---------- Post added 07-27-2014 at 07:05 PM ----------

Losing Love

Everynight I think of you
Every dream has you in it
I can't get you off my mind
I listen to sad songs to ease the pain...
I cry everynight knowing you don't love me
I smile and hold back the tears when I see you...
I act as if nothings wrong and everynight I cry myself to sleep...
I love you and I'm afraid of losing you...
I don't want to hurt you so I smile and don't cry around you

---------- Post added 07-27-2014 at 07:06 PM ----------

Someone I loved

I loved someone,
and he loved me...
He knew the true me,
What I needed and what I like,
I knew same about him...
I protected him until

One day...
He left and didn't come back,
I wait and found out that he was dead,
from that day on I didn't love
or show any emtions...
I was cold,clam, and had a pissed off
atitude most most of the time...

I didn't want it to happen again
so I just acted like I didn't care
for anyone,
but inside I did care,
but I'll never show it...

I love someone new
but I wouldn't say so
Because I don't want
to suffer anymore

---------- Post added 07-27-2014 at 07:08 PM ----------

The Lovers Night

She bleed the sun out
She drown the cries out
She sunk the darkness
She forgot the happiness

The wolf came upon her
The wolf was in man form
The wolf held the look of murder
The wolf was naked as she

The wolf laid down on her
She looked at him with no fear
The moon shown on their naked forms
The forest was silent,

Expect for their cries
The night ended
Neither woke,
The world moved on

Not noticing,
That the lovers
Never woke
From their sleep

---------- Post added 07-27-2014 at 07:10 PM ----------

Un-named Poem 1

There were two of them
And only one of her

She was everything they wanted
Everything they needed

They were best friends
Until she came along

They both wanted her
The siren that tricked them

She was only there
To test their friendship

They fought over her
Every hour of everyday

They fought until,
They both fell

She was them defeated,
Defeated by a woman

That neither of them could have
They realized too late

That they, the two friends
Were perfect for each other

But they were just too blind
Until it was too late

And they earned they fate
To be brought together

Only for a mere second
Before never seeing each other

Ever again as punishment
For being blind to the truth

Let this be a lesson
To look before you leap

And never take
What you hold dear

For granted and believe
It will always be there.

---------- Post added 07-27-2014 at 07:12 PM ----------

Un-named Poem 2

The school was built
On concerted ground
But it only lasted 3yrs

Because the screams
And pools of blood
That appeared everywhere

Everyone left for fear
Fear that the ground
Only wanted more blood

The reason for the blood and screams
Was because before it was concerted
It was a bloody battlefield

It saw many battles
And took many lives
Over the 100s of years

After it saw the last battle
It was made into holy land
But its thirst for blood stayed

People forgot the battles
They forgot it was holy
Land never to be touched

Because even thou
It was holy
It wasn’t cleansed

They built around it
Ignoring the pleas
They built on it

Only to learn of their mistake
After people at the school
Began to disappear often

The land was taking
New victims, to remind
Remind the people, who had forgot

Now it’s sits alone
In an abandoned town
That people never go to

The plants grow over everything
Everything but the school
Which still stands, waiting

Waiting for more victims
Because the ground hungers
For more bodies and blood

 


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