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Old 03-29-2015, 04:14 AM

Sitting on the beach looking at the stars
Wishing for once where you are
Together we soared to heaven
Our hearts and love were driven
By the night of a full moon
Mated for life but ended to soon
My heart is empty a shallow shell
As they took you from me i know not were....

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Old 04-04-2015, 02:57 PM

I really like the feeling of the poem. The second line sort of confuses me though, I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say in that one...

 


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