Uniplex
Valentinez Alkalinella Xifax Sic...
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05-14-2014, 02:35 PM
I see your eyes,
The glow of your soul,
Your silent cries
Are something I behold
Your hand I hold,
The thoughts you portray,
Are of finest gold
Even with the games you play
I think about you,
When you are gone
Yes it's true
Maybe it's a little wrong
But I do,
Yes I do.
You hold on tight,
To your own opinions,
Whether or not they're right
There are no other options
I think I love you,
But I am not sure
Is it true?
Could it be you?
You refuse to listen to lies,
To the fake cries,
Tears are useless to you
Unless they are real and true
I am sorry to say
That it's you I think about every day
You may not know,
But I think I do
I think about you,
Everyday I do
I think I love you,
But you'll never love me too
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beathag
The earth is singing; can't you ...
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05-19-2014, 09:36 PM
That was beautifully written. I like simple rhymes like this. It makes me think of those folks with guitars on street corners singing love ballads. They always make me feel so warm and happy.
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Uniplex
Valentinez Alkalinella Xifax Sic...
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05-20-2014, 05:51 PM
Thank you! I love that too, and like to try to convey the simple artist on the street corner vibe in my writing!
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