puffie sleeves? You mean like the way they where?

no, i did like them, though.
you know like on peasant blouses?
they aren't really puffie.
they have elastic on the bottom and you can sort of puff them up.
i'm bad at descriptions, sorry.

oooooh I understand now. *nodds*

I could try and make an attempt at them.

You fixed the steep slop but the top still seems flat...

hmm..

*goes off to mess around in paint*

Just make is slightly rounder looking like this somehow?

oooh thank you for the tip on that!

This is honestly the first thing I've pixeled that I actually like o.0

*goes to mess with it a bit more*

It's looking lovely so far :D You should be proud of it :D

I am ^,^

I submitted the one with the sleeves, but its been improved since then so I think I am gonna switch out the post lols.

or just add the newest version next to the older one?

lol - switch them and see what jelly says of the new one.

Also - maybe try shading the lineart a bit? It would make it a bit more natural looking I feel. You can use the second darkest shade toward the avvie's right as well as some of the third darkest shade as well where the light would be hitting it most...

I hope you don't mind the nitpicking! XD <333 Just want to see this shirt be in the stores because I love it :D

Got a good idea there. Maybe I should collectively add all the versions there, and she can see the improvements.

I also have a few more idea's to work on this weekend too ^.^

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Nitpick away Maria. I can not get better, if I don't know its wrong ^.^

hahah okay - I won't nitpick anymore until i see a new update though - I don't like throwing a whole bunch of stuff at a person at once.

I love when Xuvvie comes into my thread and nit picks the hell out of my stuff - I'm like "OMG I NEVER CAUGHT THAT!!!"

Sometimes you need a second person to look at it to see some things. Because your too close. Like when Rainbows mentioned the light angel I could have smacked myself lol.

Do the lines look better?

OMG YES! And the boob shape looks great now!

Okay - onto the next thing..

the bottom left corner (viewers left/avvie's right)...you have the line coming down from the boob area meet the bottom of the shirt and there is just a SQUARE of pixel the same color.....in that square (four corners...get rid of the top right corner of it...make it a light color - the color of the shading...

ugh I make no sense...

here - a visual (you'll have to zoom in to see what I'm talking about) :

Does that make sense? The square just looks chunky as opposed to flowy....

Thats the bottom corner right? Just clarifying a bit lols.

haha yes - the bottom viewer's left corner XD I'm sorry - I'm confusing D:

It's like the tiniest detail but it's something I notice XD

no no actually when I zoomed that it made perfect sense. Like this right?

haha yes!!! :D Glad you figured out what I meant XDDD

Now - one more thing - last one I can think of to be honest - have you ever tried dithering? as a way to blend the shades a bit?

I tried a bit on my purple shirt, but that was the first I've ever done it. I'm not the best at it but I can try.

You don't need a LOT of dithering - just a few bits here and there the make it a smoother transition from one shade to the other - :)

like down in the tummy area mostly right?

yeah - just a little bit from where you move from dark to light

...I am not sure whether this is what you want to achieve... I had been staring at a certain spot for a long time...
do you designed the shirt to puffed the bewbies up?

Bewbpuffs - sounds like the name of an inappropriate breakfast cereal....:ninja:

Too much on the dither?

@xuvrette- I'm not exactly sure what you mean I'm afraid. Did I make the boobs too big?

---------- Post added 06-15-2012 at 10:54 PM ----------

@Maria- that just made me laugh....histarically.

lmao I don't show it much online but I have kind of a dirty mind XD

As for the dithering - you should control it...it doesn't need to be much...you don't have to copy this but something like this is more controled and keeps the shape of your shading but just blends it slightly to make a smoother transition: