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04-12-2012, 04:42 PM
Yeah in #2 from the left in the first post, the shading was on opposite sides, but then I switched it in the next version because the light is coming from the left, but it does look better the way it was because the light is more left and to the front of the avi.
Fussed with the collar a little more, and fixed the string shadez. And no, I don't mind critique at all, I'm a total n00b to pixeling so it's a lot of help. :D
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Maria-Minamino
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04-12-2012, 04:44 PM
lol I'm pretty newbish myself to be honest - I only started this in January XDDDD
So it's kind of like the blind leading the blind lol
But you have a great sense of shape and shading so I think you are doign really well :D
I really like this hoodie and I'd totally buy it :D
I think the next step is to get Jelly in here so she can say what needs fixin just because it's truly up to her in the end :D Also - you could ask Xuvrette for help - she helps me out a LOT and I really trust her input!
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HamletSpamlet
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04-12-2012, 06:03 PM
Starting a new project to take a break from the sweater. :3
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Maria-Minamino
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04-12-2012, 06:04 PM
Cute idea for shirts Ham! I don't have access to paint right now so I can't look further at it...but I'll do that when I get home later from work XD But I like the design :D
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HamletSpamlet
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04-12-2012, 06:06 PM
I just have the basic shape down right now, it's not very refined so there's not much to look at yet anyways. Thanks though!
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I'm having trouble shading the sleeves. >:c
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Blaahhh.
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Chickie Nuggs
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04-12-2012, 08:49 PM
Oh awesome! I totes want one of those. :D
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04-13-2012, 05:19 AM
Thanks Dems. uwu
Umm I'm kinda stuck, I guess I'll leave it like this for a bit.
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04-13-2012, 02:14 PM
Hmm you've got the shading in the white area down pretty good as well as the little folds in the sleeves. The only thing I can think of is to add a small amount of dithering to the sleeve shadows to smooth those shadows out.
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04-14-2012, 06:18 PM
I really like the sweater. Actually looks like one I own in real life. xD Also, I like the little Yumeh on it.
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04-14-2012, 07:28 PM
I know right? I like the Yumeh version the most since it's a unique version of the symbol.
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Liztress
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04-14-2012, 09:00 PM
I know. I think Hammy should keep it to use.
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hummy
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04-14-2012, 10:20 PM
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hammy♥ has pretty pixels.
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Chickie Nuggs
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04-14-2012, 10:33 PM
I agree. She doesn't give herself enough credit. :P
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04-18-2012, 08:13 PM
Oh, that's a really nice top, Ham!
I would buy that in a second!
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xuvrette
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04-20-2012, 05:00 AM
O_O oversize!
I want that! Make it work! <333
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04-20-2012, 03:12 PM
I'd say it already works. That's just me, though. I hope it does get approved and into the shop!
I also hope that Hammy gets her butt back on here and pixels more. xD
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xuvrette
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04-20-2012, 05:16 PM
I think it can still be improved...
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Maria-Minamino
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04-20-2012, 05:19 PM
Xuvvie is the master at spotting details you never would think would need changing but end up needing it :)
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04-20-2012, 05:27 PM
For my eyes, the oversize could use some more depth in terms of shadowing on the few areas to emphasize its baggyness.
Thanks Maria for the compliments. XD
But all in all, Jellyly come out with the decision to put it up. so sometimes, up to my detail-ness standard is not necessary.
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Maria-Minamino
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04-20-2012, 05:28 PM
@Xuvvie - I like your detail-ness standards to be honest...it helps me get better and think about stuff I would never think about otherwise :D
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04-20-2012, 05:36 PM
awww, I am flatted and touched~
*hugsqueeeeeeze Maria*
we are lovey dovey in someone else's thread~ >.<
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Maria-Minamino
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04-20-2012, 05:42 PM
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Originally Posted by xuvrette
awww, I am flatted and touched~
*hugsqueeeeeeze Maria*
we are lovey dovey in someone else's thread~ >.<
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*shares the love to everyone in the thread* :D there :D
*huggles Xuvvie* <3
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xuvrette
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04-20-2012, 05:56 PM
so where is Hamham's butt?
so we could get her in and finish that oversize!
When I first saw it I was like...
what the... damn smart Hamham is! coming out with the brilliant idea of OVERSIZE that could fit both gender without much editing!
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Shadami
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04-20-2012, 06:00 PM
I love the shirt. I've always loved that shirt. And you're making it a mene item, so now i lurve yous!! <3 :D
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Chickie Nuggs
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04-20-2012, 06:10 PM
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Originally Posted by xuvrette
so where is Hamham's butt?
so we could get her in and finish that oversize!
When I first saw it I was like...
what the... damn smart Hamham is! coming out with the brilliant idea of OVERSIZE that could fit both gender without much editing!
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I dunno where her butt is! Probably sittin at a pub havin a cold one with all the other butts. Seriously though she's a night owl, and doesn't have class today, so she's most likely sleeping right now. xD
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