So, I'm will post poetry and I guess you guys tell me your honest opinion. Nothing's too harsh.

First Poem:Haiku

Seasons
The seasons of change
The sweet songs of harmony
Pass before my eyes

There was a kid with the flu,
So much did he sneeze and it's true.
He slept and and he ate,
it was great,
because he still had some howework to do.

Limerick