I hope u like this story, it was for when I was on gaia and my username was [F]allen [A]ngel



~My Story~

Since the dawn of time, I was a celestial being.



A Seraphim Angel, I was sworn to fight against evil, and to protect humanity... but always to remain unseen. The pain, and fears of mortals were unknown to me, I had everything I could ever need. Yet something was missing...

Duo: I watched over a mortal, Duo a human.

I watched over him for months... trying to bring happiness his way, attempting to ease any pain he felt. I was never seen, but I was always there.

I found myself thinking about him every moment. I couldn't bear to be away from him, and even more painful was the face that he could never know that I existed.
I would lay my head on the side of his bed, just to hear him as he slept.

My Fall: My love soon turned to pining, and I decided to take that final step. I was about to give up my immortality and become mortal... to fall.

Determined I flew quickly to the forest where Duo was headed, and flew as high as I could...

Then I let myself plummet.

I awoke bloody and in pain... it was so exquisite! I could actually feel. When I saw myself, I was brought back as a human, just like my love.

I was found by Duo, hurt and alone. Immediately he brought me home to take care of me. I was a babe in the woods; I had no idea how to care for my new mortal body.

But one night, he never came home.

I was very worried, there was nothing I could do but pace and think about what could happen.

'Do I think it was worth it?' you probably wonder.
Well, at the time I would have given up everything for just a moment, just a touch. I had a few weeks to spend with him, to be able to touch his skin, smell his hair.

I have more ^^
Well...probably way too many
but still
I hope it's worth reading

A graceful look
A slight glance
A wink
Are those a sign of love?

I've read all the poems
and listed my thoughts,
But I still can't decide,
Do I like him or do I not?
I can't make up my mind,
Yes?No? The chance may never come again,

My heart says yes, but my soul says no,


In the end,
my feelings shall decide
different moods
for diffirent types

Why must I
Why must I seem like a fake?

The facts are there
but are they completely true?

It seems
as if
Everytime I talk to that
one person

I feel more hallow
as if I'm living a lie



But how can I stop?
If I don't
I collapse even more

Grasping onto the past
I want to despertly
to change it

I just don't...
Why do I feel like this
I feel so fake....

Not me
The person i was before
Innocent and Clueless

Now
I describe that as stupid
My friends don't know me anymore

I don't even know myself
What happened to me?

Do I...finally realize my life?

Maybe
There's a slight chance
A possiblility

That it might come true
When I think about
Us together

It makes me smile
How far we came
Just to be
more then friends

A glistening
Falling star
Something that's now resung
A golden aura
That surrounds hope
All possiblilities

Maybe? Just maybe there's a chance, waiting for me some where in the world to have my own happy ending.

Every Girl
Every Girl
Has a dream guy
Someone perfectly
that matches them

Knows the right thing to say
Every glance
Every touch

But they missed a minor flaw
There could be a guy out there
But is it theirs?

A perfect someone
That exsists

They see 'em
But can not have 'em

Every day is just a pinning of sadness
Even just talking to 'em
Gives them a pint of sadness

Knowing he will
be perfectly happy w. someone else

They think
Am I just a minor addition to the world?
Just added
To the formor states of exsistance

Made
to be jealous
One that is devilous
To be dead
Never to maintain happiness
or a place worth living in

Wasted in a never ending world
Of the dead
People caring
People dying

Is their world of death

There are some of them I wrote myself
I hope u like it ^_^

:roll: :wink:

Oooh, BASHING TIME. 8D

Fist off- wrong forum ENTIRELY. In THIS forum, we talk about and discuss books and novels. You want to write fanfiction and short stories? That's another forum entirely.

Second of all, you did a major no-no here on Mene- double posting. Jeebus. No posting after yourself. That's highly frowned upon here.

And is that copy/pasting of lyrics or someone else's poetry in those double posts? Again, MAJOR no-no. It's considered spam, and is, I believe, a bannable offense. If it's yours, fine. If not- put it in quotes.

You know, reading the rules is a GOOD thing. If you want to be retarded, Gaia is THAT WAY.

@aimutz: A post that contains only an emoticon is considered spam ya know.

@Alegretto: No need to be so rude when you're criticizing someone, it's called flaming. And, if you want to sink down to the level of a first grader, then continue calling people names, it only makes yourself look "retarded".

@Dark_Midnight: I liked your first story, kinda reminded me of something you would put as a description in the avi arena. But this is the wrong place, try the writing/literature forum. You can receive better criticizm from other readers better there.

Originally Posted by Simplixity

@Alegretto: No need to be so rude when you're criticizing someone, it's called flaming. And, if you want to sink down to the level of a first grader, then continue calling people names, it only makes yourself look "retarded".

Well, she is wrong in the forum placement and spammage and copy/paste. Why SHOULD I be nice to such a blatant rule-breaker?

how rude! Even if she is wrong, maybe she didn't know better! don't be such a brat! :shock: Show some compassion...

P.S. love the story! It is fascinating, and goes perfectly with the Fallen Angel thing!

Originally Posted by Alegretto

Well, she is wrong in the forum placement and spammage and copy/paste. Why SHOULD I be nice to such a blatant rule-breaker?

It's called manners and common decency of a human being. Something you obviously don't know.