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Old 10-30-2014, 12:41 PM

~Storytelling Avatars~

So what is this about you say...
Well we all like to tell and hear stories during Halloween, especially scaring, frightening one's...
In this thread I am going to post a menewsha avatar pic and write a very short story about it...
it will be like a backstory to all the wonderful avatars we make with the wonderfully pixeled items...
so let's begin.
select an image with your avi and write a story about it...
or you could just tell a random one to scare us...
Everyone is invited and welcome...


---------- Post added 10-30-2014 at 05:52 PM ----------

Let me go first...



'I am... I mean I was Victoria Bloom. But everyone called me Vicky Gloom because I always wandered around looking bored and gloomy...
The only thing that cheered me up was the dress i had seen in the shop when i had gone to town with my mother... It was so so pretty and pearly, all I wanted was that dress.
I so wished and hoped my mother would get me that dress for my coming 20th birthday...
Finally two days before my birthday my mother came up to my room and handed me a big package. I knew at once what was inside... It was the creme colored pearly dress i wanted so much. I couldn't wait to wear it on my birthday.
That night i had a dream... a very strange and dark dream.
I saw myself wearing my birthday dress but there was a spider crawling on the bodice!
I woke up with a jolt but soon forgot about it.
On my birthday i got ready and wore my dress and just when i was hurring down the steps to show everyone my lovely dress, I fell...
I fell and broke my neck and... I died.
Now I am buried in my grave in that same dress... and a spider comes to visit me every night.
Its a cute little thing.'

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Old 10-30-2014, 11:10 PM

Ooo I shall come back to this thready shortly! Can it be avatars from last year as well? So many fun postys!

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Old 10-31-2014, 02:36 AM

it can be anything...
even without an avatar pic...
though i would like it if it were spooky hehehe

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Old 10-31-2014, 11:04 AM

*subscribes*

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Old 10-31-2014, 11:06 AM

Mine is a Zombie Maid xD

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Old 10-31-2014, 04:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SuperZombiePotatoe View Post
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I will wait for your's SZP
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Mine is a Zombie Maid xD
and she is a spooky one...
does she have a story?
would you like to share?

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Old 10-31-2014, 04:49 PM

I must first think of one. I'm already working on another

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Old 10-31-2014, 04:51 PM

it shouldn't be too long...
something right off your head...
like a surprize story writing test hehehe

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Old 10-31-2014, 04:52 PM

Off my head... For this avi or another??

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Old 10-31-2014, 05:18 PM

anyone will do...
i love those pants...

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Old 10-31-2014, 06:12 PM

Here's my off the head story. I couldn't stop



My name is Vivienne Adair and I am seventeen years. That's such an original way to begin a story, isn't it? But, what can you? I felt you needed know my name and age. It's easier connect with a person that way. There's a power in names and words that connects people. Not many people know that. People actually think that it's a secret, but it's quite obvious when you really think about it. Use that knowledge wisely. Now back to me...

I am an only child, although I never used to be. I had a who was younger than me, even though I thought we should have been twins. We were alike in so many uncanny ways. We didn't finish each others sentences, but each of uscould tell what the other wanted to say just by looking at the eyes. His name was Stephen. He was thirteen years old when he died and, despite what my parents thought, it wasn't my fault.

We reckless, Stephen and I, and we would spend our weekends exploring the woods near our home. I didn't have many friends preferring to solitude to chatter. I've never stuck to the norms, so I suppose you could call me a rebel. Dad certainly didn't shy away from using that name on me and I guess I just squeezed into the mould. See what i mean about there being power in names? Anyway, I was a loner, but Stephen had a little group of friends. He was your typical likeable kid, helpful and cheerful. But, despite the fact that we were totally different (and well occupied in Stephen's case) on the social scale, it was each other's company that we enjoyed the most.

On one of our explorations we discovered a cave deep within the woods. Any sensible person, upon looking at the dark and frightful, place, would have turned right around. Not us, though. We were reckless, as I said before, and rejoiced at the discovery of our own hideout just like the one in the mystery books. But, mystery books always had bad guys, didn't they?

Soon after the discovery, we set out to make our hideout more comfortable. We brought a fairly large wooden crate for a table, two smaller ones for chairs, an old lamp that Dad wasn't using, a bunch of snacks and a book of urban legends to read in the dark. We loved myths and legends and loved even more to be scared. How carefree we were, it makes me very sad to think about it. I don't cry, though. I'm so tired of crying.

We spent that afternoon taking turns reading stories out of the book. It was Stephen's turn and while he was in the middle of the story about Highway Sheila, very suddenly, he stopped and looked at me. There was so much in that look, but one sentence stood out from the rest. "We were wrong. We're not alone in here." As soon as I realised what he was saying, I felt it too. A heavy Presence, a red Presence. We had to leave, but it was too late. Another cliche. It was always too late in stories. We forget, however, that life is a story as well. Why should it be exempt from using a cliche now and then?

Forgetting everything, we both moved to stand. Stephen didn't even straighten his leg before cried out and fell backwards over his crate. I can't remember what it was like to see him like that, lying in the dust with his shirt and skin and flesh torn open. I know that I felt something then. I must have, but all I feel now is numbness. I remember trying to pick him up, but I never managed it. I was too weak and, besides that, it hurt him to move. I remember smoothing back his hair and telling him it would be okay (the liar that I was). I remember him trying to say something, but all that came out was sickening gurgles. His told me volumes, though. "Go away," they said,"Don't stay. I'm scared, but you have to go away. It's okay." And then there was nothing. Nothing but the murder weapon. I still have it with me to this day, this scythe here. It's strange how it practically robbed me of everything, yet now it's the only thing that I have to hold onto (literally). My only friend. When my parents found me, they thought that I had done it. I was holding the weapon, after all, but how could they think that I would murder the most precious person in my life? And, how dare they try to take me to the police to "answer for what I did." I didn't do anything, so what other choice did I have? I had to do it. Dad didn't scream. He was always a stern man. Mum tried to run, but she was not a fast runner. I did that to my own family even though I really wanted to do it to whatever killed my brother!

Atleast I buried them. I buried all of them in forest, beneath the willow try. It could weep for them forever, just as I had wept for them while I covered the holes. When I returned to the cave, the Presence had gone. I suspected it, though. There was no need for it to stay. I think that it was attracted to Stephen and my life and now that all of us were dead (I myself am not dead, but I think that a bit of me is) it had probably gone off to find someone other lurkers in the woods. People haven't been venturing into the woods lately and that's probably because they sense the heaviness. They're sensible people. I am not and I will wait here with book of myths for as long as it takes. And, when I meet the Presence again, I will return it's weapon. And then maybe I'll go to Hell. There is my story. make of it what you will, but do not make mockery of it. that will insult us both
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Old 11-01-2014, 05:12 PM

WoW! that is deep... Thank you SZP... and it teaches so many things
sorry i didn't read it before... thready got pushed to second page hehehe

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Old 11-01-2014, 07:29 PM

Thanks, Maha. My mind runs away with me sometimes. I entered it in a story competition!

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Old 11-02-2014, 01:11 PM

I sure hope you win...
its an interesting one...
and you can write a sequel to it hehehe

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Old 11-02-2014, 04:04 PM

I can? O_O

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Old 11-02-2014, 04:12 PM

yes like a second part...
how your character waited for the evil and finally got revenge...

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Old 11-02-2014, 04:23 PM

Hmmm, I wonder how I could play that out.
This story actually led to the creation of another character, like out of the blue!

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Old 11-02-2014, 04:25 PM

they are born all by themselves... it always surprises me how OC's come to life with full personalities attached...

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Old 11-02-2014, 04:52 PM

I know right? This was unexpected. I've been wanting to make a good faerie character for so long and I finally have one. Only I don't have a name for her

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Old 11-02-2014, 04:54 PM

ask her... she will tell you herself i have had that happen to me many times...
One day we will figure this out hehehe

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Old 11-02-2014, 04:58 PM

Strangely, I find it hard to talk to them. SO far I know that her name is a "secret"
How do you talk to yours?

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Old 11-02-2014, 05:02 PM

I imagine myself in their world/dimension and see if they speak to me...
they do often tell me who they are...
like this story i wrote about Victoria... i wanted to name her Celeste... for some reason i love that name, don't know why though...
But Nay! she said my name is Victoria and nothing else...
stubborn OC's hehehe

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Old 11-02-2014, 05:22 PM

Hmm, it may take a while with this oc. True names are really important in her world, so she won't go telling everyone
Celeste is a pretty name!
I sometimes forget that they're people. But, they remind me. I'll find out her name!

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Old 11-03-2014, 02:53 AM

try tickling her or giving her flowers hehehehe
find out a friendly gesture of her world...

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Old 11-04-2014, 06:49 AM

I KNOW HER NAME!!!!

 


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