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Old 09-12-2007, 03:40 PM

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Takes place AFTER the movie and anime, Minus the Death of Edward Elric.
In the EDWARD world, NOT the human world (at the end of the anime)

Alphonse, is the armor. Ed, age 18, Shiba age 19, Alphonse Age 17. Takes place in East City, Shiba's hometown.


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Old 09-12-2007, 03:43 PM

Characters:




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Name- Shiba Katsugaia
Age- 19
Gender- Female
Location- wanderer
Whats so special?- She is an alchemist. She has a metal left foot, like Ed and his arm/leg. No one knows there is a shard of the Philosophers stone embedded in it; even I am unaware of this. My automail specialist implanted it in my foot when she repaired me after a car accident, when a vehicle ran over my foot; she later then died of unknown causes.
I do have the power to transmute my foot to weapons (like Ed) but I choose not to, in case it should break, I don't have a repair person to go to that is reliable.
I have transmutation circles burned into my palms. With one clap I can transmute things... even merge 2 items into one... {ex. If i found a large enough bird, I could transmute my body with its body and become one with it, taking on 2 heart beats and some of its features. When im finished with the creature, with a clap of my hands the creature is back to normal, totally unharmed.}
I also have the power to revive SOME forms of life (using the power of the stone but I dont know thats how I do it). Lives/animals too large disintegrate at my hands trying to save them (ive tried a deer); I have yet to try to save a human... so far I only use this secret power on animals that are killed of unnatural causes.
I attend an art school; I do all I can to just fit in with the world, people know I know Alchemy, but no one knows that i have the philosophers stone in my foot (neither do i) and that i can revive beings. Information like that could land me in serious trouble with the military and I do all i can to avoid the military... Theyre nothing buy money hungry and power hungry dogs.

I dont have a home. I wander about, making a different shelter for myself every night. I use alchemy for my art supplies and paints. Im a pretty accomplished artist and I sell some of my art just to get by, like getting food and the occasional nice hot shower.

I never mention my family...usually I prefer not to. I never told anyone of what happened to them.

Look: Ill have a drawing of her to come. As of right now, she has long Light blue flowy hair and Blue eyes. she has RED brands of the transmutation circle, like burn marks on her palms that she keeps hidden under gloves (like Ed's)

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Edward Elric- Alchemist
Age- 18
Type- Human




Alphonse Elric- Alchemist
Age- 17
Type- Human, but in the armor

Name: Kiri
Age: Looks about 18
Gender: Female
Classification: Homunculus
Bio: Was left to die in the Ishbalan war. Was found by Scar and was taken with him when she helped him escape from Amestrian soldiers. Followed him since her memory was lost and was given the name she carries now..'fog' fitting enough for her amnesia. Isn't a pure Homunculus, is a merger between a failed attempt at one, and a human. Is able to do limited Alchemy because of it..her mark is on her right palm that is hidden under fingerless gloves, it burns everytime she uses her Water Based Alchemy for an extended amount of time.
Hair: Blonde
Eye: Blue
Alchemic Abilites: Can use water for a variety of uses, can change it's density, it's temperature..even use her ablities to stop bleeding. At least in small wounds.
((Picture to come soon))


Minor Characters:
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Major Alexander Louie Armstrong
Colonel Roy Mustang
Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye
Jean Havoc

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Old 09-12-2007, 03:46 PM

Cities:


*North City
Where Shiba and the Elrics first meet, its her hometown, where she attends school. Not very populated.
* Central

Central is the seat of government in Amestris. The National Library, Central Headquarters, and Laboratory 5 are all located in Central. It was built on the site of an ancient city that vanished centuries ago. Eventually it is learned that the city disappeared because of Hohenheim and Dante's experiment to create the philosophers stone.

* East City

Located in a backwater region near the desert, East City was the home base of Colonel Mustang and his entire outfit for most of the early portions of the anime. It's reasonably close to Lior, Resembool, and Marcoh's hometown, making it a sort of central hub for some of Ed and Al's early adventures.

* Ishbal

Officially conquered and annexed by Amestris several years ago, Ishbal was the focal point of the Eastern Rebellion. Almost the entire region was wiped out by war, and the passing lives of its people were harnessed for the production of a Philosopher's Stone.

* Lior

The desert city of Lior is home to a unique ethnic group who, like the Ishbalans, hold religion in high regard. They were formerly under the control of Father Cornello, the so-called "Prophet", but he was deposed by the Elric brothers, leading to a period of civil war that nearly destroyed the entire city. Rose comes from Lior.

* Resembool

This far-flung town is the home of the Elrics, and a great deal of important events happened here. In Episode 43, The Stray Dog, hints of a forgotten past can be seen by the river said to have once brought life from Central into the town. (The rubble of what appears to have been a large stone building forms the stream's banks.)This is where Winry and Granny live and the site of the Elrics burned down house.

* Xenotime (Note: Only appears in the anime and novel Land of Sand)

Xenotime was once known as the "City of Gold", due to its rich deposits of said element. They sold their wares far and wide, gaining great wealth, but when the gold was exhausted, the town fell into disrepair. The land-baron Mugwar attempted to use the toxic Red Water hidden in the mines to forge Red Stones, so that he could transmute gold and return the city to its former glory. However, the Elric Brothers caught on to him and, together with the sons of alchemist Nash Tringum, stopped his plan.

* New Hiessgart (video game only)

A city founded and governed by Professor Wilhelm Eiselstein, a member of the Ten Alchemists, when Hiessgart was overrun by chimeras. The city is relatively new and lies somewhere between Resembool and Central City. It appears only in the first video game, Fullmetal Alchemist and the Broken Angel, where it acts as the story's primary setting.

* Siam-Sid (video game only)

Once a gleaming metropolis, the former capital of Lebis is now little more than ruins. Long ago, the king of Lebis attempted to create the perfect human being, unleashing an untold horror which destroyed the entire civilization in a single night. The city and the fate of its residents are often referenced in the anime, but are only directly dealt with in the second video game, Curse of the Crimson Elixir.

* The Underground City (anime only)

An old city that once stood on the site of what is now Central City. In the anime, Hohenheim used the city's entire population to create a Philosopher's Stone, and pulled the city itself beneath the earth, four centuries ago. Dante used the city as her headquarters to create new stones. In the manga, it is a massive underground complex where the mysterious "Father" lives. In the movie parts of the underground city is raised above ground destroying parts of central.

* Xerxes (manga only)

Though not much detail is known, it was a city-state east of Amestris that was destroyed long ago. As the manga depicted, the entire civilization was destroyed in a single night, with its entire population sacrificed to create the Philosopher's Stone, which was in turn used to create Envy. In the real world, Amestris was the queen of the Persian emperor Xerxes. In Chapter 74, it appears that Xerxes is the homeland of the slave boy who came to be known as Van Hohenheim. In the U.S. release of the manga, Xerxes has been mistakenly transliterated as "Cselkcess".

* Briggs (manga only)

The northern base of Amestris located in a mountain range, commanded by Major General Olivia Mila Armstrong. It is a huge underground complex housing thousands of soldiers who regularly go out on patrols, as well as the centre for the development of non-alchemic weapons. Most if not all the soldiers there are extremely paranoid, accusing anyone whom they do not know of being spies from the nation of Drachma to the north. Apparently, only one incident involving patrolling soldiers successfully being attacked occurred over a period of a month about twenty years before the arrival of Major General Armstrong; the attacker was identified to be a woman, though not a spy from Drachma. Gaiden chapter "Tales of the Master" reveals that the woman was actually a young Izumi Curtis.

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Old 09-12-2007, 03:51 PM

Comments About Our Rp-


Amanda, My biggest fan, comments alot. Here is some I started saving as of Today:

Fave Character: Armstrong
"oh cool like: Amanda, art student and all around awesome person and FMA fan says, "I LOVE ARMSTONGS CHARACTER! He makes me pee my pants with fanatic laughter" or "this is by far the best RP I've ever read (disclaimer: this is the ONLY RP Amanda has ever read)" lol"

1.yeh it's good- funny too, drunk ed was fun
2.u collapsed after making cerulean and he made some rare paint for u bc u were exhausted.
3.it's f**king cute...only another artist could appreciate that gesture lol. oh no, not physically paint.
4.SonicSweeti:would make a great anime, or manga, huh?
Amanda: yeh it would lol, i'd probably read/watch it- of course it'll be a massive hit once ppl find out that the awesome pink-spangled muscle man Armstrong was in it!! lol, and mustang of course (can't forget him lol)
5. but really, shiba/kiri characters are really well developed and stuff, and i like how more info keeps being revealed and all, you're not getting too much and there's enough there so you're not bored
6. you got Mustang all naked and stuff!!! lol
7. "Armstrong saluted and dashed back into the building, sending poses and pink sparkled commands left and right." omg so funny, i can just picture that
8. ahaha- poor Al he's not gonna know how to react, i can imagine shiba "awakening" uh little Al (if it's not too gross) with all her flirty come-ons lol and him being totally freaked
9. well it's moving alright. I love Al soo much now lol hatch did an awesome job with him
10.Amanda: roy in pj's: smexy....OMG SHIBA AND AL?!?! what r u guys doing with them!!!lol and...I want little roy's running around everywhere! Hell I'll volunteer to have them! lol
SonicSweeti: LOLL I LOVE YOU!!!
SonicSweeti: XD
SonicSweeti: u had me scared for a minute i thought u were gonna tallk ab ut school

Amanda: i'm like on the edge of my seat wondering what's next....i'm having a blast reading it
11.Amanda: i'm still reading the rp: omg all is all flustered- he's gonna blush so hard his head's gonna explode- i knew shiba would have this effect on him lol, poor al
Amanda: Al is all flustered*
SonicSweeti: LOL i love al...
SonicSweeti: hes only 17, shiba is 19... so i donno.. plot twist LOL
SonicSweeti: when ed comes back to see us both in the spring hes gonna s**t a brick

Amanda: yeh, especially if they run off together
Amanda: lol
SonicSweeti: i know LOL

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Old 09-12-2007, 04:16 PM

Edward yawned...it wasn't like him to be so sleepy all the time...he stretched as he and his brother Alphonse stepped off the train...Alphonse's metal body gaining him more and more odd stares.
"Geeze you'd think they'd never seen a walking hunk of armor before Al.." Ed sighed with his hands over his head. How long had it been since they'd started this journey..he couldn't even remember.
Alphonse merely sighed and hefted their luggage..he'd lost two games of rock, paper, scissors and he was starting to think Ed had been cheating the whole time...Al never lost.
"What are we doing here again brother?" He asked with an exhausted sigh.
"Mustang wanted us to check up on some rumors out here...said something about another Chimera...he doesn't want another Tucker incident." Ed's honyed eyes turned away as the brothers held a moment of silence for the Alchemist and his daughter...that had hit a little too close to home for them. Edward sighed and then nodded.
"Time to go." He said heading off into the crowd.

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Old 09-12-2007, 05:43 PM

::Hefting my bags, 5 count, through the busy crowd piling off the train, I got off too. Someone bumped into me and I flew into a tall scary man in armor. I sat on the ground and rubbed my forehead. My paints, some completed paintings on canvas, and art supplies scattered every which way I crawled around trying to gather them back up into my bag; I was late to class as it is and i pushed my glasses back up the bridge of my nose.
I looked up at the tall dark man in the armor from behind that I had mistakenly was pushed into (Al XD) and stood, frantic and bowed to him "I'm so sorry, please forgive me sir.." I was sweating bullets as I looked down at the floor. One of my brushes rolled and hit the front of a boys shoe. I crawled over to it and picked it up, looking at the slick, leather boot and looked up. I gave the blond a goofy smile "Please, excuse me.." I blushed, continuing to gather my supplies.::

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Old 09-12-2007, 05:54 PM

Al toppled forward and had to quickly right himself before he crushed Edward. He looked back, while his brother was pushing him back to his feet..he jerked up right, sending Edward onto his face, and bowed repeatedly.
"Oh no, it was all my fault..I'm sorry." Ed in the meantime, stood and brushed himself off.
"Watch where you're falling next time Al..geeze." He squatted next to the girl and quirked a long thin eyebrow.
"What's all this stuff?" He asked plucking her brush from her grasp.
"A paint brush?"

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Old 09-13-2007, 12:10 AM

::I looked up at him, dumbfounded and scratched the back of my head, I stand up slowly, scooping up the rest of my stuff and putting them in my bag "Yeah, Im an art student... Im not that good though.." I look down at the floor and pick up the canvas that landed face down.
Picking it up, it was a landscape painting. I brushed off the dirt that gathered on it and I sighed, having to fix it, some of the paint scuffed off.
"Ah dammit.. I was up all night on this..."Looking at my wristwatch I shriek "IM GONNA BE LATE!!" I take the brush from Ed's hand and dropped it in my bag.
Running off with my painting under my arm, I wave back at him "SEE YA GUYS!" I had no idea I had left one of my smaller paintings behind, a painting of a bird.
Entering my school I put the painting down on a desk in an empty room and pull off my gloves. With a clap my hands and put my index finger and middle finger on the painting (like a gun-looking hand signal, if you get what I mean)
With a glow, the paint spread to the area that was damaged and looked as good as new. I sighed and went off to class as the bell rang::

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Old 09-13-2007, 12:16 AM

((moved per your request :) ))

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Old 09-13-2007, 03:32 PM

Edward stood and shook his head as the girl ran off.
"What a crazy girl." He muttered tapping Al's chest plate.
"No sense in dallying...let's get to work." Al sighed..he always hated this...Edward was always dragging him around..but..if he didn't watch out for him...he was sure Edward would have been killed long before now.
"Alright Big Brother...I'm coming."

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Old 09-13-2007, 03:52 PM

::The bell finally rang after the last class. Gathering all my supplies and bags I trudged out of the school slowly and tiredly. The sun was setting; it was time to find a spot to set up camp.
Walking to a nearby creek, I set my bags down and look around; I didnt see anyone. The brush was thick and i smiled, pulling off my gloves and clapped and pointed my fingers to the ground. It electrified and morphed to an Iglooo shape, fully open on one side, a small roof overhead.I liked to sleep nextr to a fire and the stars began to shine overhead. I smiled and stretched my arms up and looked to the creek. I needed to bathe. I walked to the bank and pulled off my clothes and glasses, folding them neatly and setting them on a nearby rock and sat on a log, putting just my feet in, one metal, one flesh. The automail had stopped up to my ankle, then it was flesh again. "MMM..." a fish swam by my foot and i sighed deeply.::
[i hope you didnt mind a time warp XD]

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Old 09-13-2007, 05:20 PM

((Naw that's fine XD))

"Nothing...NOT A THING!!" Edward kicked a can that lay in his way off into the darkening streets. A lamp flickered on overhead as it clattered away into an alley.
"Brother...it's only the first day. We'll find something.." Ed turned and glared at his brother.
"I'm starting to think that Mustang just likes to screw with my head." There hadn't even been any rumors about chimeras...nothing that anyone knew at anyrate.
"And to top it all off..we don't have the funds to stay at an Inn...it's late..and I think I desperately need a bath."
"Ah..that I can help you with. There was a creek just outside town Ed. You could wash off there." A smirk crossed over Ed's face.
"That's perfect. Come on!! We're going camping!" Alphonse nodded and headed after his brother as he raced off to the outskirts.

((Haha...I'm 3V1L XD))

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Old 09-13-2007, 07:04 PM

[XDXDX I <3 EDWARDDD!!!]
::The water felt so warm, and looks promising. I stood and took a slight dive into the water and after being under the water for sometime, i broke the surface with a huge gasp in the middle of the pond and smiled "Hmm... such fresh water..." I captured a floating lily pad and let it float in front of me. Only my head was out of the water. With a clap over my head, i touched the lily pad with my fingertips; in a flash it was in a bubbly soapy state.
I scooped it up with one hand and ran it through my hair. The crickets chirped. The Moon was peeking out over head; the sun was completely gone. No movement whatsoever around me and I loved it.
After soaping my hair I plunked my head underwater and vigorously scrubbed at my hair, still under water.::

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Old 09-14-2007, 01:53 AM

Edward was already stripping as the two approached the creek bank.
"Here." He said tossing his pants back to Alphonse.
"Watch these." He left his boxers on and dived head first into the water.
He stayed under for a few minutes looking around....until he noticed he wasn't alone.

Bubbles..Alphonse saw bubbles...he couldn't tell if it was a fish or Edward..but he moved beside the bank and peered in.
"ALLLL!!!!!" With a cry Alphonse fell backward as Edward ran out of the water and hid behind him.
"THERE'S SOMEONE ELSE DOWN THERE!!" He was beet red and flailing.

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Old 09-14-2007, 01:56 AM

::I came up with a huge gasp, unaware someone else was here and only my head was over the water. I looked up at the stars and sighed deeply. I swam further out into the pond and go under the water once again, I was still unaware I was being watched::.

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Old 09-14-2007, 02:01 AM

"You're imagining things Edward." Alphonse peered into the murky water where Ed had stirred up mud with his frantic escape.
"There's no one down there." Edward growled as he jerked on his clothes again, muttering about how that was the last time he took advice from Al.
"I'm telling you there was some...GIRL down there..." Alphonse shook his head and made another sweep..just in case they decided to come up for air.

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Old 09-14-2007, 02:08 AM

::I emerged at the bank, right before Alphonse and I stood before him, naked in the dark and I stared for a moment; without my glasses I was unaware who this was. I cupped my breasts and put my glasses on and saw it was the tin man from earlier. I shriek and jump back in the pond for cover "WHAT THE HELL! ARE YOU TRYING TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK!!!" I splashed water at Al, not realizing Ed was around::

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Old 09-14-2007, 02:16 AM

...If it had been possible...Alphonse would have went as red as his brother. He went stiff as he recognized the girl from before as she walked out of the water...oddly enough in about the same place that Edward had.
She shrieked and he fell back, squatting with his back turned flailing.
"NO NO THAT WASN'T IT!! I-I!!" He was at a loss for words.
"Al? What's--HOLY IT'S YOU!!" Ed pointed a finger at where she stood all the while starting a rant about how people shouldn't go skinny-dipping in a public water system.

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Old 09-14-2007, 02:21 AM

::I blushed and clapped my hands and touched the bottom of the shallow creek floor and transmuted it to a small wall, leading to my clothes. Only my head was seen over it "WELL YOU SHOULD HAVE LOOKED BEFORE YOU LEAPED, YOU PERVERT!" I threw my shoe at the short blond, and I pulled on my clothes quickly "Im outta here..pssh.." I clapped my hands again and touched the makeshift wall and it went right back to the bottom "Sorry if this is your spot.." I picked up my bags::

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Old 09-14-2007, 02:29 AM

The Elrics were speechless.
"How the......HOW'D YOU DO THAT!!" Ed cried as the girl dressed and picked up her bags. As far as he knew he was the only one that could form a transmutation circle with his body alone..well..him and teacher...but teacher wasn't there.

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Old 09-14-2007, 02:33 AM

::I glared at him "Psh, none of your business shorty. The clearing is yours, so Im outta here.." I waved as i began to walk away. My wet light blue hair in shambles, i fluffed it, unable to transmute a brush at the moment. The leaves crunched under my feet; I despised people who asked too many questions, i slipped my gloves back on over my hands and sighed, waking slowly. I missed talking with someone, but then again they probably just want me to transmute something for them, just like everyone else who spoke to me::

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Old 09-14-2007, 02:55 AM

"S...Sh....SHORTY!!!"
"Now Ed...try to be adult about this..."
"LIKE HELL!!" He slapped his palms together and slammed them on the ground, a wall shot up just in front of her feet.
"YOU ARE YOU TO BE CALLING ME SHORT!?" Alphonse quickly grabbed Ed by his arms and held him back as he flailed, all the while apologizing for his brother's rude behavior.
"Honestly, if we'd known anyone was here, we would have moved on..please forgive us."

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Old 09-14-2007, 02:59 AM

::My eyes widened at the wall shot up before me after hearing a clap. I slowly turned around and glared at him "So... your'e an alchemist too.." Pulling off my gloves and sticking them in my pocket, I clapped and touched the ground with my fingertips, bringing up a stature next to ed, to what he would look like of her were normal size "That would be you, if you weren't a midget.." the likeness to Edward was simply stunning down to the last detail; no wonder I was an artist. I turned and went around Ed's makeshift wall::
[I have to draw her, and how her hands look when she transmutes.. I just hope you get what I mean when she touches the ground and such >.> OH and your homoncolus, is the hair long or short?]

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Old 09-14-2007, 03:22 AM

Ed's jaw dropped, and he flailed more violently than before.
"WHY YOU!!! IF YOU WERN'T A GIRL I'D I'D--!!" He growled and Alphonse only sighed.
"Edward...you're so dense sometimes."
He started as she turned to leave.
"Hey wait!! What's your name?"
"YEAH, TELL HIM SO THAT THE NEXT TIME I'LL SHOW YOU WHO'S SHORT!!! RWAR!!" Alphonse ignored his brother completely as he bowed.
"I'm Alphonse...this is my brother Edward."((It's long...well about down to her shoulders))

 


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