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Old 04-20-2010, 06:00 AM

The title basically explains the game. You look at the avatar above you, and tell them if they should Add an Item (if so, say what item), Lose an Item (once again say the item), or Don't Change a Thing.

The only things you should know are:
*No Back-and-Forths (let multiple people have a say).
*If you end up posting after the person you just critiqued, to add a little heads up, be sure to write SKIP ME. This applies to other things that don't contribute to the game.
*Go into detail. One word posts aren't enough (say why you chose your opinion)
*If you choose add or remove, you must be sure to ONLY CHOOSE 1.
*Dream Avatars ARE allowed.
*I will add more rules as needed.
*Have fun!

I know that when I made this thread I was not dressed in clothing, so will the first poster have some mercy :D

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Old 04-20-2010, 06:10 AM

I would add a Sky Athena Dress. The reason for this is the hair makes me think of air and wind and tend to associate pastel colors and white with that element. Especially pastel blue, purple and green.

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Old 04-20-2010, 06:35 AM

I would add a darker shade of blue to the head, but not too dark.

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Old 04-20-2010, 03:42 PM

I would add an Innocent Posh Overskirt. I'm already seeing you following a black and white theme, and the overskirt is poofy enough to balance out the hair.

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Old 04-20-2010, 04:01 PM

add item :

Spring Breeze Hat White/Purple
or
Purple and Teal Circus Hat

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Old 04-20-2010, 11:06 PM

Take away: the mushroom ring, your avi doesn't have any browns in it and the green in the grass doesn't match the green in the outfit.

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Old 04-21-2010, 04:31 AM


Add Item, I think light pink shoes would be perfect. :)




P.S Cute thread Idea.

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Old 04-21-2010, 04:34 AM

Add an item

I think the yellow space bra would be cute.
*and thank you*

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Old 04-21-2010, 08:24 AM

I'd add some more black to the bottom C:

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Old 04-21-2010, 03:37 PM

Take away the eyepatch. It doesn't go well with the lolita maid sort of theme.

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Old 04-21-2010, 03:41 PM

I would add something black on your head. I would suggest a top hat, simply because top hats are awesome!... sorry I'm not that familiar with hats...

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Old 04-21-2010, 03:45 PM

add: a head item... like any of the following or any combination of the following
-Bitter Band
-Nightstalker Bat Hairpin
-Black Cadet Cap
-Red and Black Voodoo Hat
-Orange and Black Voodoo Hat
-Sanguine/ Ebony Revenant Hood
-Red and Black Voodoo Top Hat
-Orange and Black Voodoo Top Hat
-Bitter Hag Hat
-Riveted Black Top Hat
-Lusty Pirate Hat

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Old 04-23-2010, 05:49 AM

Don't change a thing I LOVE it >.<
(to the rater .. think st. patties...next year >.<)

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Old 04-23-2010, 07:23 AM

Add Item:
I think that, for a consistent color scheme, you should get the green laurel head-item. :3

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Old 04-23-2010, 08:34 AM

Don't change a thing! O: I think It's perfect <3

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Old 04-23-2010, 09:19 PM


Lose an item-
The bell. It does nothing but distract from an otherwise beautiful avatar.

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Old 04-24-2010, 02:40 AM

Add An Item : White Ankle/Crew/Tube Socks
Why? So that there's a teensy bit of white at the bottom at the very least where it'll peak out every so slightly. xDD;; Also to break the red monotony of sorts. XP <3<3

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Old 04-28-2010, 07:05 AM

Don't change a thing.

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Old 04-28-2010, 12:44 PM

take away:
the green in your avatar. it doesnt really match. IMO

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Old 04-28-2010, 12:46 PM

Very nice avatar, though the monocle thing disturbs me a little.

Yah, I know I should add some clothes. >D

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Old 04-28-2010, 01:58 PM

Take away - the colours you are using, they're quite over done. D;

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Old 04-28-2010, 04:01 PM

Take away the orange bow that you're using. It adds too much weight to the waist.
Replace the yellow egg with an orange one because you already have that yellow skirt in the middle.
Either find a way to get some gold in the mid-section, or take away the horns and tribal anklets.

That way it will have better color balance.

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Old 04-28-2010, 04:25 PM

Add something to the center of your avatar, like a bustier or something? =O
Just to cover up some of the abundance of white in there. XP

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Old 04-28-2010, 04:34 PM

D; not changing, indies suggested it and I likes it <3 66 thanks though

Change nothing ry C:

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Old 04-28-2010, 04:41 PM

Hmm, adding something would be overkill, and I can't really think of anything to take out that needs to be taken out pronto.
So, for now, don't change anything. XP <3<3

 


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