So then guys, this is the first attempt I'll post here. Its not really good at all, but Any suggestions would be amazing.

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I lightened up the shading just a tad.



Notes:
I decided to try something that has both sleeves and a vest. I wanted to push myself to go slightly further this time. I am really pleased with the way the white chocolate color turned out, but I'm still working on the nature.

Another post maybe in case?

Hello Coraaa <333 I really like the colors you chose for your shirt and I love the idea of an undershirt/overthing! I think i actually preffered the boob shape in the first one though - looks rounded like a boob whereas the line defining the boobs in this version is more straight...

also - try added a bit of dithering to it to make the shades blend a bit more - but this is looking great for your first try!!!

I wondered if the shirt made the boobs look to flat, I talked myself back and forth between the two. I almost thought the first one made her look like she had two sets of boobs lols. But in retrospect I guess this one looks too flat.

Thank you for the idea of blending as well. It might make it look less.....two dimensional.

Dithering shouldn't be used too much but it's helpful when you want the shading to look smooth :D

Seriously though this is a really awesome shape you have going! You just need to refine the boob area slightly and then work on the shading :D

Ok, home now, gonna try working with the dark purple on the boob area. Still think the first one has two distinct boob patterns.

Also going to work with some dithering.

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I tried a different boob line slightly. Does this look better?




I also tried dithering slightly. Not sure if I did enough though.


---------- Post added 06-12-2012 at 01:51 AM ----------

And a DRESS!



Debating adding sleeves to the dress....but can't decide yet.

A NEW SHIRT.

I'm actually kind of excited about this one.



I'm not sure If I want to take out the gold in the sleeves though.

i like it, Cora♥.

I'm happy with the way the shading in the blue came out o.0

Still not sure I like the yellow in the sleeves though.

I support blue and gold.
good good.

Why thank you ^.^

I thought the color combo turned out exquisite together.

if you do add sleeves please keep the sleevless one, too.

On the dress? I really need to work on the shading with that one o.0

I like the shirt. Did you ever think to just take the sleeves off and have it been sleeveless?

You know, I didn't actually think of that. But that may solve the problem with the sleeves... I am gonna see how that looks!

on the shirrt.

oooh I never really intended to add sleeves more then they are ^.^

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better or worse?

I think it looks better. Might need to fill out the top part of the chest area.

I think the sleeves were a cute idea, but they were uneven (one was falling down, and the other was pulled up towards the shoulder). If you line them up and readd them, they might look better. :ninja:

I also have a little tiff with your light source.. On the tummy, it comes from the left, while the breasts shine on the right. @3@

Originally Posted by Liztress

I think it looks better. Might need to fill out the top part of the chest area.

Fill out?

@Rainbows- Hmmmmm....I may try that as well.

OMG. I feel like an idiot right now. Thank you for pointing out the light source.....I can't believe I missed it. *totallydoesartforreal* My art teacher would murder me right now.

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Is this better on the light source?

i like it.

I think the avvie's left boob...it looks just a BIT to flat - I mean the lineart of the boob - it's like straight across up top and at a very steep,straight angle down to under the armpit...

otehr than that - I"m loving it! I love the deep color you used in contrast to the gold!

Hmmm....I was almost thinking that as well. It didn't look so flat when the sleeves where there but it sort of looks weird, I need to adjust that a bit. I'll work on that this weekend ^.^

Another shot at the boobline:



I may keep it sleevless but I have a few idea's for sleeves that I plan to try.

i think the beewbies look good.
i like the puffie sleeves at the top.
they always remind me of summertime,
i don' tknow why.