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#76
Old 09-16-2013, 11:20 PM


i like number six
and the leaf pants are really cute

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#77
Old 09-16-2013, 11:22 PM

Good to hear my latest is the best hummy ^^

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#78
Old 09-16-2013, 11:28 PM


don't go by hummy
she has not one lick of artistic talent
but hummy knows what she likes
=)

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#79
Old 09-17-2013, 12:52 AM

Well hummy has looked at a leaf before right?
If it looks like a leaf it's good enough for me.

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Old 09-17-2013, 07:00 AM


*hopes jelly likes it*

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#81
Old 09-17-2013, 07:06 AM

I think Maria might be the one judging it.

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#82
Old 09-17-2013, 07:32 AM


i'm sure she is judging her contes
i was just hoping jelly likes it

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#83
Old 09-17-2013, 07:35 AM

I see. ^^ alright.
Now off to bed with you.

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#84
Old 09-17-2013, 03:54 PM


i fell asleep without saying good night
sorry
but, good morning!

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#85
Old 09-17-2013, 05:44 PM

All good hummy.
Currently trying to reshade that leaf... compared it to the example leaf and it's a bit too dark.

Also dawned on me I was shading the complete wrong direction.

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#86
Old 09-17-2013, 09:26 PM

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All good hummy.
Currently trying to reshade that leaf... compared it to the example leaf and it's a bit too dark.

Also dawned on me I was shading the complete wrong direction.
I'm drawn towards number 6. :O

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#87
Old 09-17-2013, 09:32 PM

Now that I zoomed in... and have a better look.
I am thinking that... you need one strong vein and few minor vein. As in dark shading for main vein and lighter shading for minor vein.
I like how random the minor vein spread out in number 6.
I like how the different depth shading of the main and minor vein in number 3.
As for the overall shape, the upper curve, make it curver. Erase that corner to make it rounder. THen it will be better.

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#88
Old 09-17-2013, 09:39 PM

Really? Alrighty then... #7 it seems is the wrong direction.
Do you think I should make it lighter though like #7? Or should I leave it as it is and make the rest of the pants?

@ meave - Ooh... that's a good point... I'll do that again and see if it improves it :)


Liking the improvements I made, but I made 2 different shading versions, opinions?

New item I made... possible shorts for the leaves to go on... I think?

I used a pair of mene shorts for shading reference and the initial waistline.

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#89
Old 09-18-2013, 01:20 AM

I love the idea of leaf pants! Keep up the good/hard work Poet!

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#90
Old 09-18-2013, 01:23 AM

Thankies :)
Hopefully I'll be done in time, that leaf is kicking my butt

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#91
Old 09-18-2013, 01:28 AM

Well I wish you luck!

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#92
Old 09-18-2013, 01:36 AM

I will do my best :3

Maria-Minamino: Sorry to ping =/

I made a quick concept piece to see what kind of problems I might run into and I was curious... would this be simple enough?

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#93
Old 09-18-2013, 05:14 AM

hmm... shade the outline of the leaf. The lighter portion outline can have some shading.
and you still haven't make the upper corner of the leaf rounder.

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#94
Old 09-18-2013, 05:17 AM

Not sure what you mean by upper corner.
I rounded it a little but it looks somewhat rounded to me o.o

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#95
Old 09-18-2013, 05:51 AM

As in not round enough.
The current leaf shape, is roughly a tilted kite shape, upper corner(not the center vein).
If your leaf are all in same direction, I would use viewer top left corner...for number 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8, 9.

I still feel there is something not right about the veins. It is the way they curve...

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#96
Old 09-18-2013, 06:08 AM

So the veins are maybe too perpendicular?

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#97
Old 09-18-2013, 06:48 AM

Yes... I think the way it falls... doesn't seem to follow the contour of the leaf shape.
Hard to explain how I feel, because I can't grasp the logic yet. x.x

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#98
Old 09-18-2013, 07:10 AM

All good. How do my shorts look?

I will tweak the leaf tomorrow :)

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#99
Old 09-18-2013, 07:58 AM

hmm... I am not a fan for those kinda design.

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#100
Old 09-18-2013, 08:26 AM

I see. Any ways I can improve it?

 


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