New WIP put up

"For The Punx Pants"

Feedback pl0x?

Not bad! :D I like your rolled up pants. And i agree with you, there's a ton of female clothing, but hardly any male

The jacket is looking a lot better! Have you tried adding Shade 1 yet for a high light color?

I love the texture of your rolled up jeans....the roll up looks a bit strange to me...I personally envision them to be slightly more rectangular in shape kind of like this: http://freenewfashiondesign.com/wp-c...ends-jeans.jpg whereas yours are more oval shaped...*hope I'm making sense*

I love the punk pants so far - I think there are a few guys who posted in the male item thread asking for pants like that - so I know they will be used!

Thank you Ama x3

@Maria: I think I have, I'm going to go back and re-shade it tomorrow to make it look better. I think I'm getting better at the shading in general :3

As for the rolled up pants, I'll look into that, I felt that part looked a bit weird as well.. I just haven't wanted to mess with it because I was afraid I'm mess the pants up xD (It was before I saved it..so there is no loss going back now)

And thanks, I knew people wanted the bi-colored pants so I took a shot at them and have decided to make a whole punk-themed set. c:

I also updated WIP with the checkered shoes I'm working on.
Any suggestions on how to make it look smoother? :o

There is a male item thread?! O___O

About that punk trouser.
It is a tight one that looks like legging to me, is it suppose to be tight?
On viewer's right, the pant's hemline is too straight.
Not really sure what kinda pattern of punk you want it to look like. But currently, I think the bones are all... skinny.
Is that silver xxxxx line on the righr knee meant to be stitches? I suggest, exaggerate it to expose one or 2 pixel of skin beneath.
Maybe because of the color contrast between colors you chose, the waistband looks overshadow and not clearly defined in terms of minor detail. Maybe by using lightest and darkest color side by side would be able to define some details. It looks kind of faded weakly at the moment.

I will have those sneakers...even if they'd only be a male item. They're awesome.
With that said, the shape of the (our) left shoe looks a bit wonky at the tip of the toe. It's too squared off. That'd be a simple adjustment of a few pixels brought down a pixel or too. But the shape, besides that, looks awesome. I love the shape of the shoe facing towards us (our right).
I think the checkers of the shoes would "mellow" out with more shading of the shoe. If that doesn't seem to work, I'd try maybe adding a mid-tone of the light and dark colors around the dark squares. That'll help the two colors blend together, but still keep the checkered pattern. :)

xuvrette: Yes, right here!
http://www.menewsha.com/forum/main/s...on-thread.html

The pants, yes are suppose to be skin tight. I may move it out a pixel or two.
Thanks for the feedback, I'll be sure to work on it tonight keeping everything in mind x3

neller: You'd have to be male :illgetu: <3 I'll be editing all my items tonight with everyone's feedback in mind.

I agree about the shape of the shoes - they look to...stub toed right now. But the checked pattern looks pretty cool! I can't wait to see them colored :D

you ARE getting better at shading :) Before it was just blobs of color - now they have a purpose :D

I wear guy's shoes in real life, why can't I on Mene???? HUH?!

hippie neller :lol:

"For the Punx Jacket" updated

Onto the rolled up shorts/pantsthings.

neller: Because I can't wear high heels on mene. Suck it up :talk2hand:

Hai linny<3

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Maria-Minamino:

Rolled up jeans updated c:

@Doody
Uh, yea you can. Lol. You just have to change your gender to equip them, then change it back afterwards.

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Originally Posted by Linnea

hippie neller :lol:

Isn't she groovy? lol

Then you can deal with doing that for any shoes you like that are male-only.

:talk2hand:

Twas my plan this entire time. ;P

hey, terrible doodyhead :)

neller is grooveh!

Originally Posted by Terrible D

WIP:
Rolled up shorts:
or

The first one looks better and more 'real' due to the curve on the rolled up part, but they also happen to look more feminine. I think that's because they rolled up part is so much smaller. If you make the second pair of capris with that curve, I think they'd look perfect!

I think if you keep how they were rolled up before....and made them thicker like they are now...it would look best. Keep the curve going upwards like before.....kind of like this maybe?

I agree with both of them! They have great advice.
And I really love those jeans. :drool:

DAMN YOU AND YOUR MAKING OF MALE ONLY ITEMS. Lol.

:drool: Great suggestions!!

Siri: and Maria-Minamino: Thank you <3

I'm going to take the edit maria did, work on the shading of the rolled up part because it's looking kinda funky.
I'll update it in a bit!

neller: Suck it up, woman!

For those too lazy to look at front page.

Rolled up pants/shorts updated


(With help from Maria!)

Looks great!! :-)

It looks like a band to me... the rolled up part...

I don't think it looks like a band at all. A band would be tight against the skin. The rolled up part has some bulk to it. Definitely looks like rolled up shorts to me.

Those are damn cute pants yo.

@Xuv: I agree with neller, I don't think it looks like a band. x3 I'm quite happy with the current product!

@Bellybutton: Thank you <3