11-05-2009, 10:52 PM
This will be the tease for a story I'm working on. I need feed back: thoughts, corrections, suggestions, what you like, what you don't like. All greatly appreciated.
There will be a time when you look back on you life. On everything you've even done, thought, or chose. What you've said and how you've acted. On all the people who have been in your life-- stranger or not-- and what they've done in your life. In their life. On how the world was then, and on the environment around you. Of how you reacted to things. To anything. To everything. To the smallest detail. You will look back. And Judge.
You will realize the person you've been-- and the person you want to become. For in this moment, you will have discovered things about yourself that you have never known-- even never thought possible of yourself.
You will have discovered who you are, and what makes you unique. You will have to make choices in that moment. Choices with impacts. Choices about youself. Choices that might effect the world over, or maybe someone's well-being. Choices that you will have to live with for the rest of your lives.
I only hope that those choices don't come with regrets.
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