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Old 02-11-2007, 02:03 AM

There once was a boy, and a girl
Who were more than average in this big, strange world
With a determination by any means
To shoot for the stars
And live for their dreams



The girl, a writer, is what she dreamed
The boy, a hero, by any means

However the boy, the girl did know
Had a special shine whenever he'd show
Her heart would fill with a jealous rage
Whenever the boy would stride on stage



And all the stars within the sky
Could not match any of the stars in his eyes

Even in darkness, or amongst crowds, she would know
How to find the boy, by his precious aura's glow

And the girl would wonder to herself constantly, "Why?"
Why she had not the same sparkle in her eyes



Soon her determination for dreams turned to hate
With anger and violence in her wake
Whilst the boy would linger himself on
Wondering what exactly he had done wrong

For he had always from the start
Had followed the compass of his heart


Never to the girl did it occur
That the boy had longed only to impress her



So once upon a snowy night
Where not a single white cloud was in sight
Both boy and girl on a cliff did sigh
At the glamourous cosmic canopy painted up high


In the midst of the moment, in the midst of it all
The girl's anger had lifted, and a smile did form


Actions quickly happened, completely unplanned
Exchanging soft kisses, and taking one other's hand



Away from the troubles of this world
Together, suddenly diving into the deep blue sky



They, giving their final leap, their all
Showed each other how to fly.

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Old 02-11-2007, 02:32 AM

I choose to believe they could actually fly and not that they committed suicide.

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Old 02-11-2007, 02:33 AM

You're open to your own interpretation. XD It's not really specified. XD

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Old 02-11-2007, 04:34 PM

I'm not sure if it's happy or sad. ;-;
But either way... its a realistic theme.

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Old 02-12-2007, 06:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Anamei
I'm not sure if it's happy or sad. ;-;
But either way... its a realistic theme.
Im guessing its both.

Sad that they fell into the sea as suicide im guessing but happy since they were together.

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Old 02-13-2007, 02:54 PM

I never thought it as a sad poem. :shock: Though as I said, everyone's free to their own interpretation on it!

 


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