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Old 02-11-2007, 01:52 AM

I look at you from a far

I can see you
But you can't see me


I long to tell you
To ask you
Just to make any excuse to talk with you
But I am trembling with fear


I watch you pass me by
I am but a fool


I will never have the strength to speak
I will never have the strength to move


I was in love with you
But I was sure you didn't know of me


What a fool I am, to be so shy?



Another day passes
Another chance is gone
Another opportunity is wasted



You walk past me again
I approach you slowly, but surely


You wave at me, you notice me


Finally I talk to you
Finally I can tell you


This unknown courage, this unknown strength, now flowing through me


I have the strength now to speak
I have the strength now to move


I can't help but blush as you take my hand
You too were shy, all the while
We were the same



Finally a day has been embraced
Finally a chance has been taken
Finally an opportunity is used


As we walk away together
Hand in hand
I turn to hide my beaming smile


I am not afraid to speak
I am not afraid to cease a moment
I am not afraid to love


I am shy no longer.

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Old 02-11-2007, 02:40 AM

This one reminds me of myself when I was younger. I was terribly shy in social setting or just talking to people in general, but my wife has gotten my past that. :D

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Old 02-11-2007, 02:41 AM

I've never been shy! this poem was written for someone who was shy though. XD

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Old 02-11-2007, 11:17 AM

I like it. :)
Reminds me of myself a bit lol. >.<
I enjoyed reading it and although there wasn't really anything describing imagery I still imagined it in my head since I know the feeling lol.

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Old 02-12-2007, 06:57 PM

^^
That poem reminds me about this autobiography i read once.
It was real cool like the one you wrote.

 


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