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#3326
Old 07-09-2013, 05:55 PM

good: love the use of the new item

bad: You should really be wearing sun hat.

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#3327
Old 07-12-2013, 02:07 PM

Good: All the colors flow nicely together.
Bad: Can't think of anything.

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#3328
Old 08-20-2013, 04:12 AM

one good thing is that the theme is perfect and you used lots of items that fit perfectly.
one harsh thing is... that.... i can't think of anything harsh...? not really so harsh though lol

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#3329
Old 08-20-2013, 04:17 AM

Good: You made an awesome vulture avatar.

Harsh: I am insanely jealous.

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#3330
Old 08-20-2013, 04:19 AM

Linnea: (i'm tagging you here because I got sniped, but I still wanted you to see my suggestion :) )

one good: This is a fantastic theme that is very well executed. It's really unique and you've used all these items very well.

one harsh: the head feels rather lacking still. Vultures have saggy skin on their heads and some black tufts. I maybe suggest the wrinkly forehead item from the Tengu CI. It may give the appearance of saggy skin.

---------- Post added 08-19-2013 at 09:20 PM ----------

Ah, dammit. I got sniped! D:

one good: the scenery is pretty kickass and lively. I love all the vibrant colors

one harsh: still working on the head. The eyes work with the avi, but they still bug me a little just because of my personal preferences towards those eyes. I've always found them a little odd, however, they still seem to suit this avi.

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#3331
Old 08-31-2013, 03:53 AM

i've already said thank you, suo and you were right about the wrinkly head item

so your turn, mwahahaha

one good: the use of items is perfect. you show lots of gore and make it look really yucky and scary and still left the background pretty sparse which doesn't take away from the avatar itself.

one bad: hmmm i don't think i've got anything bad. the chains hanging in the air don't seem to fit unless they are hanging from the trees... or perhaps that i wish i could make something scary like that

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#3332
Old 08-31-2013, 06:49 PM

Good, it's creative.

Harsh, you need more pink at your feet and more of the green on your head. You could also use a background.

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#3333
Old 09-02-2013, 02:19 PM

Positive: It's a greatly done mermaid theme and one of the best I have seen made on the site.

Negative: You have had this avatar for quite a long while now. I'd like to see you come up with another brilliant avatar.

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#3334
Old 09-06-2013, 07:03 AM

Pro: I love the use of all the bird items and the gold, you look like some mythic god.
Con: I think a gold choker could help you out?

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#3335
Old 09-06-2013, 08:07 PM

Pro: You look like The Doctor.

Con: I can't go on time traveling adventures with you.

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#3336
Old 09-13-2013, 05:50 PM

one good: you have a very interesting theme and i can see a story there

one bad: not a lot of detail oriented items or layering. it works, since the background is busy but the avatar individually is a bit lacking

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#3337
Old 10-05-2013, 05:19 PM

Good: The colors are perfectly balanced!

Bad: Non! She's amazing!

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#3338
Old 10-06-2013, 12:36 AM

Good: Fantastic colours and theme!
Bad: You seem a little top heavy. Maybe balance it out with clouds around your feet or something?

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#3339
Old 10-06-2013, 12:56 AM

good: it's an amazing steampunk avatar and I love the use of background items

bad: I got nothing

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#3340
Old 01-24-2014, 10:56 AM

good: looks like a fashionable rockstar performing on stage, great use of items for the background

bad: I think the little hearts look a little out of place.....but they could be the love of the fans below the stage

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#3341
Old 02-08-2014, 04:26 AM

Good: Nice and seasonal, and I like the use of the lucky cat...

Harsh: Too many varying shades of red and pink. They look a bit off.

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#3342
Old 02-08-2014, 04:44 AM

Good: It's a great forest avi.

Harsh; The sign seems out of place.

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#3343
Old 02-10-2014, 03:36 PM

Good: It seem to be Alice in a creepy forest!

Harsh: those tatoos...

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#3344
Old 02-12-2014, 10:49 AM

Good: I love the colours, consistancy and tone
Harsh: I feel like the tree is a bit out of place (but can't think of any replacement stuff, so I'll get back to you on that)

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#3345
Old 02-12-2014, 05:26 PM

Good: It's an awesome theme and very well put together.

Harsh: I wish you could get more of that peachy color in the upper part of the background.

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#3346
Old 02-12-2014, 10:35 PM

~Skip Me~

So do I love, so do I.

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#3347
Old 03-23-2014, 11:00 AM

Good: The colours are amazing
Bad: Maybe encorporate some more black?

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#3348
Old 03-23-2014, 05:07 PM

good: It uses colors that I don't tend to work with.

harsh: would like to see some sort of background

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#3349
Old 03-25-2014, 08:54 AM

Good: I love your layering and colouring distribution
Harsh: Your sheep is still an alpaca.

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#3350
Old 03-25-2014, 11:33 PM

SKIP ME!!!

I don't have a sheep. Besides I love my alpaca.

 


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