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#51
Old 01-31-2009, 03:41 PM

Hmm... Your most recent one has stumped me. If I hazarded a guess, I'd have to say the sun, but I'm not certain. If you're referring to a real celebrity, then I'm lost because I'm completely out of the loop when it comes to things like that.

And for your previous one, are you referring to a purse?

Jingle jangle
Your charms create
A cacophony of sounds.

Ring bring
Not your only tone
But one of a symphony.

My connection to the world
Comes with me everywhere
I carry all my friends, my family
Safe within my pocket.

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#52
Old 02-02-2009, 03:17 AM

I'd Have to say a cell phone.
Different ring tones.
A connection to everyone.

Tick, Tock
A annoying little sound,
A sound that perceives life and death.

Tick, Tock
So annoying it is,
But if it stops will you go on?

Tick, Tock
Though annoying it is,
It lulls you and you know you go on.

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#53
Old 02-05-2009, 01:51 AM

I go under the shade,
Sharpening my blade,
Right in the darkest night,
Oh, what a fright!


Another poem

Enjoy the holiday season,
Its always here for a reason,
To enjoy it with family and friends,
And get the latest trends.

Reply if you like them.:)

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Hey. Cool avatar. I wish I had enough money to do that.

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#54
Old 02-06-2009, 05:36 PM

for the first one: like a ninja in the night or something?

my poem:

Your shine lights up my darkness
Showing me the way
No matter the darkness, you are there
Lighting the way for all to see
Watching over all, so no one gets lost

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#55
Old 02-07-2009, 04:52 PM

hmm, makes me think of a floating ball of light.

Fair one, you hold my heart
Fair one, you hold my soul
If ever love was art,
Your love would be far too cold.

I reach for you, but you deny
Emotion, Love, you give me lies
I want the truth but you say 'Wait,'
And much restrained, my patience wanes

One day you disappear, just gone
I wander without aim
Then realize all this time I'd done
With my life, Nothing.

@Delish: that other poem was a purse, wasn't it? ^^
I use my purse for everything
oh, psy already said it XD

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#56
Old 04-02-2009, 04:42 AM

Might be close minded of me at the moment, but I saw a girl who's life was dedicated to a lover but in the end he didn't return her love so she saw that her life has been nothing.

I cried for you today
I saw your back turned to me
In anger?
In regret?
To have yearned for so long
Been caressed by your hand for so long
My bed side is cold tonight
As is my heart
Ice frozen 'til eternity

Not necessarily good when sleepy sleepy, but I hope it will suffice

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#57
Old 04-07-2009, 03:15 AM

Hmm, heartbreak? Crying, frozen heart, sounds like heart break.

Women cry and children sigh
As the men fight and die
A pool of crimson blood
Over the land it floods
The men kill
Kill, until they've had their fill

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#58
Old 04-25-2009, 08:51 PM

[Kidalanna seems to perceive that your poem is about war?]

He's done it for his family,
The family that is starving,
Although it's been done naughtily,
For him a headstone they're carving.

The baker's bread was missing,
A farmer lost a chicken,
His wife he's no longer kissing,
By friends the man was stricken.

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#59
Old 06-28-2009, 12:00 AM

i got a father that was forced to steel and even kill to keep his family alive

sleek and smooth I fly through liquid skies
breathtakingly beautiful with a youth that never dies

you know not that i live
you know not i give the wind to guide your sail
you know not the beauty of my tale
though you have sung of it
you do not know...



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#60
Old 07-26-2009, 05:04 AM

Dragon? God/Goddess of some sort...the flying is throwing me.

Sail, Oh Tortured Soul, sail!
For your fate at the horizon sits.
Sail, Oh Tortured Soul, sail!
And come to the end of your wits.

Fight, Oh Tortured Soul, fight!
For more bloodshed will surely come.
Fight, Oh Tortured Soul, fight!
For soon your life will be done.

Rough, but I like it ^_^

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#61
Old 07-28-2009, 05:14 PM

@ Sidhechild: You got it right, pretty much. ^^ [he didn't kill, but he did steal; at the end, he gets executed for it]

Hmm... Is it about the crew of a sailing ship [the sail part] who are about to crash into something? [the 'your fate at the horizon sits']

Heaving over the edge,
It slowly rose from its rest,
Shining over the hedge,
Child wakes, it passed the test.

The joy it spread,
As the horizon it passed,
We'd all be dead,
If it's that shine were it's last.

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#62
Old 07-29-2009, 01:34 AM

Well done...I'd take a guess at yours (I'm pretty sure I've already got it), but I don't want to post so soon after mine...

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#63
Old 07-31-2009, 04:27 AM

@Kidalanna:
Your poem is about the sun rising? xD I suck at interpreting poetry.

Waned sphere fades away,
Another sleep-filled twenty-four.
The world awakens.

...I suck at writing it, too. >>;

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#64
Old 08-01-2009, 08:45 PM

@Faggotory Fun: Liking the haiku. I wrote six or seven of those last night...Um, I'm going to take a guess and say you're talking about the new moon?

Despise me if you must,
For I look beyond your lust,
and push and pull you as I may.

Others caress your skin,
And oh, how I hate them,
for trying to have their way.

So go on singing your song,
As though nothing is wrong,
and I will sit among the stars, and sway.

I tried to make this one a little tricky, so I'll give you one hint: It's not about a single object or idea.

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#65
Old 08-04-2009, 01:57 AM

@ Faggotory Fun: You got it right! ^^
I like your haiku, but, isn't the second line supposed to be seven syllables? o.o

@ Shtona: You have succeeded at making it difficult... I'm probably going to get this WAY off. >.<
My brain's frying... D8
Uhhhh... Is it from the Moon's POV, talking about Earth and.... hum. The 'others' it refers to... would one be the sun...?
Gah, I'm sorta bad at this. =.=
Nice poem you wrote~ :3

Rising, falling,
Chanting, calling,
Melodies float along,
Sighing, Crying,
Twisting, persisting,
Notes follow the song.

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#66
Old 08-05-2009, 07:17 AM

I see a love song. the melodies and persitant calling

If each moonlite teardrop falls without a thought
Do we think how which it falls?
If the apple hits the ground,
Then why did it come down?
Without a thought, without a sound
It just begins to act.
Like it is only but a force, acting only to react.

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#67
Old 08-09-2009, 05:10 PM

I think teh poem is trying to challenge people to notice things they don't normal do. About how much of life we see but never really think about.

If you can kill two birds with one stone, what does that say about you?
Are you cunning like a fox's smile
or simply the snake that hides beneath the shadows.
Should pride be in the way we hurt, scam and steal.
Is it too late for us to feel.
Are we too weak to get hurt ourselves.
Are we too strong to let things go.

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#68
Old 08-11-2009, 09:09 AM

I thought it described, and or asked, if you are outgoing, and
full of wit and smarts, or are you shy and don't show it.

Myy turn.

The rose petals fall as the breeze closes in..
The rose becomes trapped. They cannot move.
Only the blowing wind is moving them..
Pushing forward isn't working, yet pushing back works
increasingly.

Yet, when a woman falls, and the man comes in,
The woman becomes trapped. She cannot get out.
Only his begging and pleading keep her there.
Trying to go away isn't working, yet going forward
displeases her, with only the man being happy.

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#69
Old 08-11-2009, 11:05 PM

I think this sounds like a bad relationship. with roses and references to love.

It is sliding now above the horizon,
Silver bright it glows.
Like a hanging disk, or drop of light
She glids amoung her diamonds.
Some howl in song to praise her,
but she has no ears to hear.
Up the horizon, through the sea
she greets her sister,
then goes back to rest does she.

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#70
Old 08-12-2009, 12:16 AM

I'm gonna say the moon, or mother moon and her diamonds are the stars, the howling songs are the wolves, she greets her sister the sun then goes to rest as day approaches.

Your music calls to me in the crisp cool air of the night
though I can barely hear it.... to be near it... seams right

your lilting flutes and haunting songs...
make me dream of dancing the whole night long

sometimes I can barely sleep, for the ache of wanting you
most nights I can only dream of what you kind can do

and sincerely I thank you, for giving me such sight
and once again I thank you for this enchanted night

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#71
Old 08-13-2009, 08:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Princess of your Heart View Post
I saw like a ghost whispering something on my ear...a white one...idk a bit scary for some reason


Life of a Teenager


Life is full of thrills,
And life can be rough,
Yet life is full of chills,
And life can be tough,
Making decisions,
Fulfilling your dreams,
Choosing your future,
Isn't easy as it seems,
Dealing with pressure,
Dealing with school,
As people criticize you,
They make you look like a fool,
Drama and gossip,
Floating around,
People are talking,
No truth to be found,
Hang out with friends,
So the fun never ends,
Don't drink and drive,
..Maybe then you'll save a life,
Becareful who you trust...
Take a risk if you must,
Share all your laughter
Smile everyday
Forget all your problems
It's better that way,
Just know who you are,
Believe that you can make it
Live your life to the fullest.
And try not to break it.
This is taken from this website: http://www.teen-beauty-tips.com/life...ager-poem.html

tsk tsk tsk:evil::offtopic::talk2hand:

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#72
Old 08-16-2009, 05:31 PM

@ Kat Dakuu: Y'know, that's a snazzy way to look at that poem, I like how you interpreted it. When I originally wrote it, it was supposed to be about singing. Though, seeing it as a love song is rather interesting.

@ AcidReyne: Did you write the poem? Because, I think we're supposed to use poems written by ourselves.
Also, I suggest next time leaving the title out, as it gives away the topic and doesn't give the next person the fun of interpreting it.
Sorry if I sound rude.
So, seeing as the title is 'Life of a Teenager' I'm guessing it's probably a poem discussing ups and downs of being an adolescent and various things to avoid, who to be careful of, and such advice.

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The minute it entered their bodies,
A boy's fate was done and set,
With the shiny car keys,
Great force the boy has met,
Coming home from parties,
A boy's fate Death did get.

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Old 08-17-2009, 09:37 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Kidalanna View Post
@ Kat Dakuu: Y'know, that's a snazzy way to look at that poem, I like how you interpreted it. When I originally wrote it, it was supposed to be about singing. Though, seeing it as a love song is rather interesting.

@ AcidReyne: Did you write the poem? Because, I think we're supposed to use poems written by ourselves.
Also, I suggest next time leaving the title out, as it gives away the topic and doesn't give the next person the fun of interpreting it.
Sorry if I sound rude.
So, seeing as the title is 'Life of a Teenager' I'm guessing it's probably a poem discussing ups and downs of being an adolescent and various things to avoid, who to be careful of, and such advice.

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The minute it entered their bodies,
A boy's fate was done and set,
With the shiny car keys,
Great force the boy has met,
Coming home from parties,
A boy's fate Death did get.
Uh, no.. that was a quote from another post, but the post got deleted by the person.:cool:

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Old 08-20-2009, 04:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Kidalanna View Post

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The minute it entered their bodies,
A boy's fate was done and set,
With the shiny car keys,
Great force the boy has met,
Coming home from parties,
A boy's fate Death did get.
I think it's about drunk driving.

Two a.m. the body puts on fishnets
thigh highs, knee-hight boots.
the senses choke
on too much powdered
foundation
caked on and
sour flowery perfume
wishing to be met with cheap cologne
the mind wanders
slick sidewalks
yellow reflections
of near empty city
and waits to hear
the honking horn.
All so that the heart
can mimic a beat.

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#75
Old 09-02-2009, 09:33 PM

i think it's about a prostitute. "...And waits to hear the honking horn." and the description on the clothes first intales a runaway goth girl,but then the line about waiting to hear a horn intales that she's a prostitute..............k,here's mine..


Scared to death,waiting for it to stop,
Just waiting for her attaker's rage to pop.
The slick sidewalk beneith her,blood all around.
She waits in pain to be found.
Her attaker has gone,leaving her alone.
To weak to get up and cold to the bone,
The rain pours down on her,as lights flash just before her eyes.
She cries and cries for help,but no one hears,and yet,still she cries...
All she did,was walk home alone,now she waits for death to give her a last kiss.
Now she thinks of what she will miss.
15 and very happy,now,she lies on the sidewalk bleeding.
Everything is black then,and now sweat is beading...
Beading everywhere...

In the hospital,she is revived,
As she opens her eyes,everyone has sighed.
Life has been given to her again,her attacker behind bars.
She realizes that life is all ours.







i just realized,that the meaning of this poem is really hard to figure out......:sweat:

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