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lilmissshortee
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Old 08-04-2008, 09:40 AM

Written On Parchment,
Declared aloud to your heart,
My Feelings For You

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Mystery people,
hiding their identities,
privacy or fear?

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Pugnacious person,
petulant and aggressive,
immature infant.

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Sadness and bloodshed,
horrors for the frontline troops,
how can this be right?

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Blaring sirens sound,
criminals lurking away,
darkness conceals all.

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Painting on my face,
plastering on foundation,
hiding many faults.

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Speedy computer,
gateway to communicate,
knowledge overload.

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Wonderful romance,
lustrous and steamy kisses,
it will end in tears

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Palpilating heart,
fear accumulates inside,
thudding and pumping..

Smouldering hatred,
aggression overwhelms me,
desire to hurt you.

City chick shopping,
fashionable threads and shoes,
glamorous lifestyle

Raven evening,
candlelit dinner wasted,
I'm waiting here.

Comfort beckoning,
Warmth and great security,
Undisturbed dreaming.



Hydrating water,
gushing from a blue river,
continued supply.



Immense emotion,
indescribable feelings,
unexplainable.



Collection of stars,
spotlights in the raven sky,
enchanting beauty.


Comment?
Add any haikus you've done as well :)

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Old 08-06-2008, 12:09 AM

Yay haiku! ^_^ I like yours. ^_^ I have all my haiku on Deviant Art.

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Old 08-07-2008, 03:39 AM

I've only written maybe one haiku and I lost it. But yours are way better than mine.

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Old 08-07-2008, 09:17 PM

I like to write Haiku's but I don't think any of mine are as good as yours :3

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Old 08-09-2008, 09:12 PM

I've never been one for haiku, just because of the abruptness of the statement, but I'm rather fond of yours. It's like each haiku tells a complete thought instead of three half thoughts.

 


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