Seridano
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10-09-2012, 09:20 PM
You're welcome, dear. Glad you like it. ^.^
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star2000shadow
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10-09-2012, 09:42 PM
>_> i wants..badly.. that thign would look awesome with some of hte weapons mene has..
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Seridano
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11-15-2012, 04:22 PM
Last edited by Seridano; 11-15-2012 at 08:11 PM..
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xuvrette
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11-15-2012, 08:35 PM
Is that maroon top... a slit from the sword or something?
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Seridano
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11-15-2012, 08:54 PM
It's actually just a random strap, but I suppose it could be interpreted that way. o.O
In fact...I kinda like that...so here's an edit!
Last edited by Seridano; 11-15-2012 at 10:51 PM..
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dessertdesiert
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11-15-2012, 09:13 PM
Please be warned I have never really critique before, so take my opinions very little. I am trying to help and overall I think your items a very cute and would definitely buy all three of the ones above, just not the mask cause i am not a huge mask person.
I like the lovely in leather. I don't know about the length of it.. but that might just be me. Any particular reason you went with vertical stripes down the outfit?
She's a pirate maroon top i think is cute. Is it weird that I see a bat in the cutout above the chest?
Is there a reason why the pirate top and the leather outfit have slight different styles on how the avie is wearing them, the pirate one seems to hug the avie a bit more and the leather one seems to make the avie a tad bit more busty.
I like the design of the mask, it kinda looks like a mixture of a tree and a deer. xD The mask itself makes me think the avies have a long forehead, which might be true, but that's what it looks like and maybe it just needs something so not so green, maybe put the star red thing at the top down a little bit that might be able to break up the green forehead.
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star2000shadow
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11-17-2012, 02:07 AM
ohh..ohh 'Grabby hands' I WANT the woodsprite mask.. and i love the rest of the items to but i saw that mask and was like 'man i gotta GETt hat'.. only its not otu yet lol
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neller
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11-18-2012, 12:39 AM
I want that Wood Sprite Mask! That's awesome!!!!
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Seridano
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01-02-2013, 03:30 PM
Glad you lot like the mask. It's my favorite item thus far / it was incredibly fun to make.
And here's a little something new for both genders (since I've been making far too many female only items >.<)
Andraziel's Wrap
Last edited by Seridano; 01-02-2013 at 03:37 PM..
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Maria-Minamino
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01-02-2013, 03:57 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Seridano
Glad you lot like the mask. It's my favorite item thus far / it was incredibly fun to make.
And here's a little something new for both genders (since I've been making far too many female only items >.<)
Andraziel's Wrap
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That's very pretty - I would totally wear it :D
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Seridano
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01-02-2013, 09:13 PM
Danke, dear, glad you like it.
Here's my latest work in progress. Still needs a bit of tweaking here and there and a name. Any suggestions?
Last edited by Seridano; 01-02-2013 at 09:17 PM..
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Jeannesha
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01-02-2013, 09:16 PM
I love corset things.
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Seridano
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01-02-2013, 09:18 PM
As do I! (so I figured I'd try my hand at one of em...with varying degrees of success)
Now...to add a sleeve gem of not to add a sleeve gem...that is the question...
Last edited by Seridano; 01-02-2013 at 09:20 PM..
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Maria-Minamino
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01-02-2013, 10:35 PM
the boobies look super perky XDD but I guess that's the cincher at work! I love how you do texture!
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Seridano
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01-02-2013, 10:37 PM
Aww, danke, dear, I've been trying out different method of texturing and I'm pretty pleased with this one. And yeah they do.
-flounce flounce- Look at ze boobies! xP
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Maria-Minamino
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01-02-2013, 10:41 PM
hahahaha *runs and hides from the boobies*
seriously though - you have a nice eye for detail!
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Seridano
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01-02-2013, 10:43 PM
You can't hide from ze boobies! They will find you!!!
Danke, dear.
Just out of curiosity, should I keep the version with the shoulder gem or the one without?
/needs feedback
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Maria-Minamino
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01-02-2013, 10:46 PM
I think the little bit of detail there is nice - it's small and most won't notice it - but it adds to the piece and makes it more interesting :)
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Seridano
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01-02-2013, 10:47 PM
Alrighty then, with it is!
/stares at shirt
Not sure if finished or not...
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Maria-Minamino
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01-02-2013, 10:53 PM
Do you ever color your lines?
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Seridano
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01-02-2013, 11:03 PM
Sometimes. Depends on the item and the palette I'm working with.
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Maria-Minamino
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01-02-2013, 11:06 PM
okay - yeah - I think it would really soften up the shirt to give it a more whimsical feel - I don't have it in paint right now so I couldn't tell XD
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Seridano
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01-02-2013, 11:08 PM
I'll throw in some coloring and see how it looks in a bit, Maria. Thanks for ze feedback. <3
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Maria-Minamino
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01-02-2013, 11:10 PM
You're welcome - feel free to tell me hell no XDD it's your creation :D
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xuvrette
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01-03-2013, 03:31 AM
Design:
The neck piece seems to be choky and the pointy part seemed to be poking into the chin.
Shape:
left sleeves seemed to be more puffy, while right sleeves is flatter.
If it is a loose sleeve and with such length, most of the time it has a seam between bodice and sleeves. It seemed that your left one have seam and the right one do not have.
Your curly hem is too straight. What I meant is not the curly, is the major shape. It should follow how the belly curve. (refer to menewsha t shirt)
Shade:
For the brown part, you seemed to have a little bit of pillow shading tendency.
Could improve on the shading of the curly part near the hem. I could give more insight if you rectify the shape.
As Mariaria mentioned, lines are better to be shaded in big piece of item. Small items are around below 6 pixels. Bigger than that, mostly could use some good on line shading.
The pinky infinity symbol on the chest might need more defining element. it looks like... it is there, but not there...
what is the material of that embroidery? It is like shining. O_O
That is from my point of view.
Especially on design, if that is your intention then you can ignore certain points that relates to it.
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