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Old 12-20-2007, 08:31 AM

I made a song. But... it doesn't have a tune yet, so it's a poem for now.

Warnings: Profanity

Two words, Fuck you
By: Alexandrus Gambino

You extend your hand to me
smiling, acting like you're my guiding star
But don't pretend like you don't see
This relationship just won't go far

Two words, Fuck you
Don't pretend you understand what I'm going through
Singing my heart out like a rockstar
just because I found out who you truly are.

So you asked me to look you in the eye
but you already sew my eyes shut
You act like you don't know that you're asking me to die
And behind my back, you treat me like a mutt..

Two words, fuck you
don't pretend you understand what I'm going through
singing my heart out like a rockstar
just because I found out who you truly are...

Two words, FUCK YOU
Stop pretending that what you say is true
singing my heart out like a rockstar
wishing I ran away in my car

Two words, fuck you
don't pretend you understand what I'm going through
singing my heart out like a rockstar
just because I found out who you truly are...

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Old 12-20-2007, 09:35 AM

..Lacy Loves it.
like alot.
=/ if something bads happening to you. im sorry! x.x;; I think that poem/song would be a good screamo song. >.>; -claps- good job. <3


P/s. Love the siggy. teh sticks and stones.. and the pie.. so cute. x3~!

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Old 12-20-2007, 09:44 AM

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Originally Posted by Lsaylor
..Lacy Loves it.
like alot.
=/ if something bads happening to you. im sorry! x.x;; I think that poem/song would be a good screamo song. >.>; -claps- good job. <3


P/s. Love the siggy. teh sticks and stones.. and the pie.. so cute. x3~!
>.> nothing bad's happening to me ('cept... You know. The guy I have a crush on has someone already >.> But I got over him.)

I also made a twelve days of christmas one. Lemme fetch it from my blog.


Here's the twelfth day, so it'll be shorter and less likely to cause me trouble.


On the twelfth day of Christmas, my true love did to me:
She cheats on me
She hung me from a tree
She betrayed me
She lied to me
She blacked my eyes
She ignored me
She hurt my feelings
She killed me
She stabbed my soul
She broke my heart
She slit my wrist
Then she slowly stabbed my heart out.

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Old 12-20-2007, 09:59 AM

Awiee..
-Hugglescuddles-
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love hurts.. take it from some one whos depressed and will never be happy again. t_t;

i like your poems.
^-^;<3 bleh. im choking and coughing again and its four in the morning and i have school in a few hours..

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Old 12-20-2007, 11:05 AM

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Awiee..
-Hugglescuddles-
=[
love hurts.. take it from some one whos depressed and will never be happy again. t_t;

i like your poems.
^-^;<3 bleh. im choking and coughing again and its four in the morning and i have school in a few hours..
... Are you kidding? Why didn't you go to sleep?

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Old 12-20-2007, 11:55 AM

you sound so angry

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Old 12-20-2007, 12:28 PM

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you sound so angry
I am, a little.

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Old 12-20-2007, 12:33 PM

!

Haru likeys alot~ ^0^~<3

How long did it take you?
When I try to come up with songs they take me half an hour... which I find is a little long.

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Old 12-20-2007, 03:06 PM

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!

Haru likeys alot~ ^0^~<3

How long did it take you?
When I try to come up with songs they take me half an hour... which I find is a little long.
ten to fifteen minutes...

Listening to music helps speed up time. Classical music like mozart, etc.

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Old 12-20-2007, 03:19 PM

i like it. maybe a little guitar solo with the screamo. It makes a nice poem also!

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Old 12-20-2007, 10:14 PM

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Quote:
Originally Posted by Lsaylor
Awiee..
-Hugglescuddles-
=[
love hurts.. take it from some one whos depressed and will never be happy again. t_t;

i like your poems.
^-^;<3 bleh. im choking and coughing again and its four in the morning and i have school in a few hours..
... Are you kidding? Why didn't you go to sleep?
o.o; Lacys very depressed and tends to stop breathing alot. x_x;

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Old 12-22-2007, 04:34 AM

Me likes it :D

A lot!

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Old 02-12-2009, 07:37 AM

Lol, I might compose a violin piece of that, what do you say?? XD 8D

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Old 02-15-2009, 11:18 PM

Ah, very moving!

 


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