[as taken from my D.A.: www.radiumxeyes.deviantart.com ]

Written a couple years ago for 2 dear friends of mine.
Enjoy!

"Hymn of a Fatal Romance" - Ash Z.

The tears that the angels cry
Fall like ashes from the crimson sky
Heaven's on fire and nothing can be done
To stop the war of the moon and the sun

Romance fell to the bottom of hell
Frozen in time for a hideous crime
It cries the tears the angels cry
Falling like ashes from the crimson sky

Draw your Ace of Swords, my love,
For we are fighting this war from above
Softly singing the deadly hymns
As we fight, the horizon dims

And we can't stop this now
I've made my everlasting vow
And we can't fight this now
We've made our fatal vows...

Romance fell to the bottom of hell
Frozen in time for a hideous crime
It cries the tears the angels cry
Falling like ashes from the crimson sky

"Stagnant River Red"
"Escape"
"Look At The Moon"
"Rage More"

I'll come back and read the ones you linked to another time, I promise, but I just had to comment before I went to bed. xD That's a very original take on either falling in love or falling out of it... I can't quite tell which, maybe it's doing both at the same time, eh?

You have great word choice and flow, it almost reads like a song. I hope you keep right on writing!

hehe thank you, Lania! =D I appreciate your input on it ^_^
It's pretty much being in love but something ultimately ending that love, even though it hurts to do so; but yeah...hehe, thank you =]
I'll try to keep writing but I'm lacking motivation lately ^_^;;; we shall see~ =D

Writing is never something you can do on command... or rather do well on command <.<; and poetry is probably the most fickle master of all

Just a few new ones...yep.

"Requiem"
"Speak"
"Fall"
"These Prison Bars Are Worth Bearing In Your Name"