I had made this on another site and decided to share it with my fellow mene players :3

If I had a choice between you and my life
I would choose you
If you needed a heart
I'd gladly give my heart

If you said you were dying
I would die just the same
If you needed some caring
I would give you such caring

If you ever felt alone
I would feel alone without you
And if you ever canceled me out
I would just come back in a heartbeat

Do you like it? Or should I change it to something else that makes more sense and less cofussion?

I like it :)

Though just something to point out, it has a lot of repitition of the same words like heart, caring, and alone. Gives a heavy repetitive feeling. Other than that I'd concider it perfect ^_^ and cute =3

I especially like the line "I would just come back in a heartbeat" ^_^