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Old 03-09-2007, 05:44 PM

no more tears will I cry,
for the lies you've yet to tell.
no more screams will escape
______my lips,
for every word you have yet to
______yell.
no more apologies or pain,
to ease each word as it rips,
______into my poor broken heart.
you've yet to do a thing,
______I'm a monster for this deceit,
and a victim of my own
______selfish dreams.
it was my utter defeat,
____________to fall in love with you.

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Old 03-09-2007, 07:10 PM

Wow, that's deep, I really enjoyed reading it.

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Old 03-10-2007, 02:31 PM

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Originally Posted by [ f a i t h
]Wow, that's deep, I really enjoyed reading it.
:) Thank you very much.

- sapphire

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Old 03-12-2007, 04:52 AM

very thaughtful
kind of has a rhythm like a tide

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Old 03-12-2007, 05:03 AM

This is beautiful! Great work!!

 


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