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Old 09-19-2009, 06:11 AM

New poem up: True Story

This poem is about the day Strange_dreams_512 visited me for 3 days, and wishing her mother understood why we decided to meet. ^_^ read and comment if you'd like, I would greatly appreciate feedback on this one.

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Old 11-06-2009, 05:01 AM

Aww...true story has to be your best poem ever!

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Old 11-06-2009, 05:19 AM

^^" Thanks... any specific part/line your favorite?

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Old 12-23-2009, 12:29 PM

I liked Whispering Wind and, actually, quite a few of your poems. One of those riddles were pretty epic. <3

As a note, I also really liked True Story. <3 Had such a gentle, yet well... "look at it" feel to it. "Look at it" feel, as in look around the people and their problems around you...

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Old 12-23-2009, 12:48 PM

^+^ Thanks...

Was my first attempt at riddles, =) pretty glad it was enjoyed

=D that was exactly how I wanted "True Story" to be interpreted :squee:

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Old 01-19-2010, 10:31 AM

New poem =3 "New Year", while it's long past new year o.o I was inspired to write it for some weird reason...

 


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