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Old 05-01-2009, 11:12 PM

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        • ---------- Hello! I would like some little suggestions on my art. If you would like, I will suggest some things to you if you ask ^^

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          : NEW IMAGE THAT NEEDS SUGGESTIONS!
          It's my WIP and I was wondering what you guys thought. ;3
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Old 05-02-2009, 07:50 PM

(I only looked at the first one)
Cute! The coloring looks good as well, but the hair does not look very natural; it looks stiff.

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Old 05-03-2009, 12:27 AM

Thank you ^^
I will work on that :lol:
Yeah, that was my first picture I drew anime style :3

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Old 05-03-2009, 03:57 PM

O-O!!
That is really good for your first time! Man, a little more practice and you could be awesome!

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Old 05-04-2009, 09:40 PM

Haha, thanks ^^
I will! I'm always drawing whenever I have the time to <3

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Old 05-13-2009, 12:49 AM

cute! But I do see room for improvement; like others said, it feels stiff. I like the colors and subject, also, it'd be nice if it was bigger.

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Old 05-13-2009, 09:48 PM

very cute concepts! i particulary like the last one. i think you just need to improve on your shading a bit hun; don't use such high contrats, make it all blend a little more, and study the way things fold and fit over curves and such. you've got an excellent start, i can't wait to see more from you!

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Old 05-18-2009, 09:40 PM

Thank you guys! ^^

pandemoniumswings: I'm working on that right now. The hair is starting to improve in my drawings. I'm just too lazy to scan right now. xD

Amythist: Thank you! On shading, should I use blues and purples? I don't know. They always turned out to look good sometimes and bad sometimes.

Curves are always hard to remember. I'll work on that. It makes the picture less stiff. ^^

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Old 05-19-2009, 06:12 PM

It's not so much the colors you use that need work, it's more like the difference between the dark and lightness that you use, try to make it a bit more subtle and less noticeable. :)

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Old 05-20-2009, 06:34 AM

I think there's always room for improvement for every artist, but I really like them, your chibis make me smile.

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Old 05-30-2009, 01:44 AM

i luv your art its soo cute ^^ i can't suggest anything because im
not a good artist and i don't know much about art but for your fisrt
try on anime style for the first one thats pretty awesome :3
keep up the good work

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Old 05-30-2009, 06:30 PM

Awww, soo cute! =) I really like the way you draw and color the eyes, I've never seen it done like that before. Also, that's probably one of the cutest cupcakes I've ever seen drawn. =)

Keep drawing, they're lovely!

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Old 06-01-2009, 02:08 AM

So far you seem to be sticking very much to the traditional anime-chibi style, which is a very good way to start learning, but you need to work on your sense of depth, dimension and color.

As silly as this sounds, the best way i personally have found to work on depth is to draw from life...try this.

Draw a chibi, however you like. the draw your hands three times. then draw the chibi again.
the drawings of your hands may turn out terrible, but it helps train your mind into trying to express 3-d objects on paper, and it'll help you to make your chibis look less 'flat', per-se. I hope you continue to work on your art, i think you have a lot of potential. :D

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Old 06-09-2009, 08:04 PM

I really love your style. Simple and colorful. C:

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Old 06-10-2009, 03:05 AM

Aww Its sooo adorable! I especially like how you color it. Sucks for me, i can draw but not color XP. Keep on drawing and i guarantee that you can totally improve.

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Old 06-14-2009, 01:24 AM

Thank you everyone!

I really like all of the suggestions given and I'll keep on drawing! :squee:

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Old 06-29-2009, 08:04 PM

New art posted!
It was a freebie on Gaia! :heart:

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Old 08-05-2009, 07:57 PM

My WIP is posted on the first page.
Any suggestions or comments are great! :heart:

 



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