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Old 11-16-2013, 11:06 AM

There's a pain in my head,
And it won't go away.
It feels like barbed wire coiling and uncoiling
Itself around my brain, everyday.

I always stay silent,
Even though I want to curse and shout.
I feel like breaking open my skull, sometimes,
So that the agony can drain out.

I can't remember when it started.
I don't when it will cease
But, when I write, I feel much calmer.
Poetry and prose are my release.

When my fingers grasp a pencil,
The pain is no longer in control.
I wire loosens. There is serenity.
God wraps his arms around my soul.

I know that it will tighten once more,
It is something that I dread.
But I have my words. They are the daggers that I use
To stab the demons in my head.

There's a pain in my head.
It won't go away.
But I know that it will,
If not now, then someday.

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Old 11-26-2013, 06:13 PM

There's been a time in my life
where I've felt the same
uneasiness stabbing me like a knife
but who's there to blame?

What is it that weakens our mind
what is it that we have to find
what do we miss, what do we need
for our mind and heart not to bleed

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Old 12-01-2013, 02:49 AM

Ooo nice SZP! I noticed some typos though and a missing word

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Old 12-01-2013, 07:29 AM

Seriously? Point them out if you don't mind :D

 


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