Alexandrus Gambino
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03-10-2007, 02:07 PM
I'm a soldier on the battlefield
starin' at the blood-red sky
turnin' to the darkness in
my heart for disguise.
and though I don't show my tears
deep inside I cry
wishin' for eternal peace
like love in the sky.
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Deji-chan
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03-10-2007, 03:20 PM
Ooooh, it's nice. n_n Very touching~
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flaming-Scorpion
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03-10-2007, 11:52 PM
mmmm i think you could have better wordin =/
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Sapphire Clouds
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03-11-2007, 12:43 AM
I really love the flow of the entire piece. It's a very vivid picture that you paint. :) Awesome job!
- sapphire
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faery*angel
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03-12-2007, 11:41 PM
I'd love to take the imagry from that poem and draw it...Telling the truth...
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Alexandrus Gambino
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03-15-2007, 10:07 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by faery*angel
I'd love to take the imagery from that poem and draw it...Telling the truth...
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yesplease! It would be great if someone made art of my poem.
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mor_noa
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03-15-2007, 01:17 PM
Really nice. :]
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Enniel
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03-18-2007, 06:37 PM
I can just picture it!! :3 nice job, conveying a strong picture and emotion in just a few lines ^^
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