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Old 03-10-2007, 02:07 PM

I'm a soldier on the battlefield
starin' at the blood-red sky
turnin' to the darkness in
my heart for disguise.

and though I don't show my tears
deep inside I cry
wishin' for eternal peace
like love in the sky.

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Old 03-10-2007, 03:20 PM

Ooooh, it's nice. n_n Very touching~

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Old 03-10-2007, 11:52 PM

mmmm i think you could have better wordin =/

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Old 03-11-2007, 12:43 AM

I really love the flow of the entire piece. It's a very vivid picture that you paint. :) Awesome job!

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Old 03-12-2007, 11:41 PM

I'd love to take the imagry from that poem and draw it...Telling the truth...

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Old 03-15-2007, 10:07 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by faery*angel
I'd love to take the imagery from that poem and draw it...Telling the truth...
yesplease! It would be great if someone made art of my poem.

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Old 03-15-2007, 01:17 PM

Really nice. :]

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Old 03-18-2007, 06:37 PM

I can just picture it!! :3 nice job, conveying a strong picture and emotion in just a few lines ^^

 


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