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Here I will write a love story with at least 4 characters. You may tell me if you like the story and ways to make my story a tad bit better. I will only post four times a day which means I will post for every character I have at least once. Feel free to read this story. Please feel free to critique my story. You may leave comments on my profile about my story or you may send me a private message. ENJOY!
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Character Profiles:
Males:
Name: Adrian Xavier Evans
Age: 17
Occupation: High School student
Orientation: German
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Name: Matt Alexander Castro
Age: 18
Occupation: High School drop out.
Orientation: Italian
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Females:
Name: Jaki Alice Michel
Age: 16
Occupation: High School student.
Orientation: Australian
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Name: Suzu Michell Michel
Age: 16
Occupation: High School student
Orientation: Australian
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Background Information:
Adrian and Matt are best friends. They have been ever since second grade. They act more like brothers than friends. They liked to hang out a lot until one day Matt decided to drop out of high school. He was sick and tired of all the drama at high school. Adrian's mother forbade him from seeing and hanging out with Matt. Secretly they hang out only because their bond is stronger than anything you can imagine.
Jaki and Suzu Michel are twin sisters. They obviously were raised together for years. They never hated each other or ever fought. One day they go to high school as Juniors and they meet two seniors. (Matt and Adrian) Jaki falls for Matt while Suzu falls for Adrian. The only problem was that Matt wanted Suzu and Adrian wanted Jaki. Will these two blood sisters fight now? Or will they settle everything in peace?
-Stay and find out. I'm sure it'll be worth your time!-
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Adrian was awake after a really bad party last night. He was forced into going home by his mother and to make things worse he didn't even get a chance to drink. He was very upset and couldn't figure out why his mom had come to the party looking for him. He instantly shrugged and got out of bed. He was already dressed for school because he slept in his clothes. He wouldn't tell his mother that though. He grabbed his bag and went down the stairs, out the door, and down the street. Adrian instantly smiled as he saw his best friend Matt. "Hey Matt. What's up bro?" He said as he hugged him and stuck his tongue out revealing his tongue ring. He had it done last night while he was a bit high. Again he wouldn't have told his mother that.
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Matt hugged Adrian back. He then leaned against the wall as he spoke to Adrian."Nothing really. Just want to chase local tail. IF you know what I mean." He said teasingly. When he said things like this he basically meant to check out his old high school and maybe get some action. But then again he had already dated all the hot girls, the good looking nerds, the popular girls, the cute girls, and the girls who only wanted sex. The only girls he had never talked to OR even tried to get with were the Michel twins. He had always thought they were super HOT. 'Who would want a guy like me? Shoot, not even I would want a guy like me...' He thought to himself as he sighed inwardly. Matt and Adrian started heading for the school and see what was going to happen today.
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Jaki was ready to see some guys at school. She always loved hanging out with her friends and making fun of he desperate losers at her school. She even invited Suzu, her sister, to do the same but Suzu was too soft. She was way too sensitive for such a thing. Jaki and her sister walked to school which was only ten minutes away from their home. As soon as they arrived Jaki walked to her left and Suzu continued straight ahead. Jaki met up with her friends and started talking about all the desperate losers until she spotted Matt. "Ch-chelsea...who is THAT?" She asked her best friend as she stared admirably at Matt. "hm...? Oh, that's Matt Castro he's a high school drop out. He might come back this year but who knows." Chelsea responded with a slight admiring sigh. Jaki looked at Matt and sighed one last time as she blushed deeply.
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Suzu always strayed from her older twin sister Jaki. Not because she didn't like hanging out with her sister. She just wanted time to herself to read her favorite book "Vampire Diaries". She had loved the story for about a year now. They intrigued her in so many ways even though at first she hated vampires. Suzu was now at the library reading quietly to herself. She managed a couple giggles here and there as she read. A sudden bump made her drop her deliciously amazing book. She quickly bent over to pick up her book. A strange figure picked up her book and stood straight up before her. She slowly stood up and stared at the figure. "Sorry about that, I accidentally bumped into you while looking for my water bottle.""I-it's ok. It happens you know?"Suzu replied as her cheeks grew warm. She didn't know what to say. She was tongue tied as she stared into the young man's eyes. She then noticed that the young man just so happen to be Adrian Evans. She stayed silent as she looked into his beautiful blue eyes.
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This is all for today. Please feel free to leave comments on my profile about my introduction. If you have any helpful information please do not hesitate to critique me. I will not hurt you with a fish :feesh: because I am good with criticism. Thank you for reading my introduction please come back tomorrow to see what happens next. <3:vicky: :squee:
