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Lemoni
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04-20-2007, 03:55 AM
Thy brilliance blinds me,
Mine eyes close,
In attempt to block it out
I stumble,
My quest for darkness –
Consumed by light
And those who would
Take thy hand and lead thee,
Close thine eyes in
Ignorance
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Amelie
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04-20-2007, 04:05 AM
It's short and simple. I like it, it's almost opposite from the normal "run in to the light" sort of poem. Good work.
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Lemoni
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04-20-2007, 04:14 AM
yayyyyyyyyyy!!!! thankies! I kind of like it too... in a way that only the author can like it. kind of the 'its ok, it was the mood at the time' way ^^
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Amelie
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04-20-2007, 04:20 AM
Well those types of poems are often the best, even if only the author or other authors like them ^.^
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Lemoni
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04-20-2007, 04:29 AM
are you an author yourself?
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Amelie
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04-20-2007, 08:32 PM
Yeppers, mostly poems but I am working on a few books.
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Lemoni
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04-20-2007, 11:36 PM
Wowwwww awesome! My older sister finished a book she had been working on for a year and a half just a few months ago, and already she's working on another! -.-; I dont understand writing books. If you've seen some of my other work I already posted on Mene, I usually stick to wierd little poems, and some really short stories
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Amelie
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04-20-2007, 11:45 PM
Some people work better in condensed form. I think that most of the motivation behind writing books is to see how the lives/stories of the characters and world that you have created turn out. Most of the time authors don't even know the end of the book until it is finished, at least most that I have met.
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cyanideislove
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04-21-2007, 01:57 AM
That's an awesome poem!! I can't write poetry to save my life.
[ahem, Austere old ladies, and azure abattoirs XD]
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Lemoni
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04-21-2007, 02:01 AM
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Originally Posted by cyanideislove
That's an awesome poem!! I can't write poetry to save my life.
[ahem, Austere old ladies, and azure abattoirs XD]
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heeehee i cant say I really like how the poem came out. I have a wierd thing where the words and meaning get lost between my mind and hand ^^ hey cydi!
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cyanideislove
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04-21-2007, 02:06 AM
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That's an awesome poem!! I can't write poetry to save my life.
[ahem, Austere old ladies, and azure abattoirs XD]
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heeehee i cant say I really like how the poem came out. I have a wierd thing where the words and meaning get lost between my mind and hand ^^ hey cydi! |
hi emmamunster!!! woop woop! austere old ladies... ya that one was weird. azure abattoirs is weider though... :]]
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Lemoni
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04-21-2007, 02:17 AM
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Originally Posted by cyanideislove
That's an awesome poem!! I can't write poetry to save my life.
[ahem, Austere old ladies, and azure abattoirs XD]
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heeehee i cant say I really like how the poem came out. I have a wierd thing where the words and meaning get lost between my mind and hand ^^ hey cydi! |
hi emmamunster!!! woop woop! austere old ladies... ya that one was weird. azure abattoirs is weider though... :]] |
A dime to you,
a quarterback
social insecurities
hang off your back
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Watermelon and
pomegranate
summer heat so hot
get a man to fan it!
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upinthetrees
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04-21-2007, 07:06 PM
I love to write poetry, but I can't really write anything else. ^^
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