Woah, im hoping I'll be able to remeber this. It's a poem I wrote a while back, then memorized, but it was about 4 months ago so im not sure if i can remeber it perfectly. Here goes.

Coming from the darker side
Strain to see the light
In every dark soul abide
of the soul in spite,

The need to see a peaceful self
To release the feelings pent
To see upon one's heart's own shelf,
a message, heart-felt sent

Cold air from the outer world
enwarmed amid the flesh
upon the message seal ensnare
spurring judgement sweet and fresh

Egad, i think that's it ^^; I'll double check later and edit it. It might even have a fourth verse... Yeah. There was a fourth verse. Shoot. I'll edit it as soon as I find the old poem and can double check this. But in the meantime, how do you like it? :?

I think you did a good job!!! =3. i like it, its not bad for your first or second try at poetry right?