it's a chibi i drew of Razor when he had a girl avi. ^^ my second time using MSPaint, my first attempt is in my scraps.

how is it? is it bad?

MS Paint attempt two


~NEW~

a few new traditional media drawings i did. i think i'm moving toward a style that i like and that i've been able to draw more than once. meaning, i think my style is starting to be stable.

anyway, tell me what you think. i know the anatomy of the fullbody pic is off. (i think i did the legs and feet are wrong, big time)

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cool good job!

thanks!

Wow, thats really good for MS Paint!

I can't ever draw that well on MS Paint. xDD Good job~ ^^ I really like the eyes. o:

Wow thats good! I really like the eyes! <3

thanks! i really like the eyes too. it's my first time being really satisfied with the coloring of eyes.

and if anyone is curious, i used a mouse. that's why the lines are thick and choppy.

That's pretty good :o I'd probably clean up the lineart a little more; yannow, line weight and whatnot too. Also, maybe try dithering a little bit for the shading? It would add a little more depth, methinks.

As a lot of other people have said, I like the way you draw eyes. :]

Wow with a mouse? That is killing. lol

I really like the eyes like every one. Her right hand has a problem. even if it's curled. That's just too long. And her ears are a little scary. But in over all, it's cute! And add shading and all if you want.

@mokibus - dithering? i've never heard of that before. *searches internet*

@crystal - lol i suck at hands in general and ears. i try not to draw hands and ears that much. i usually cover them up with something.

That's really nice! Maybe try shading some more, and clean up the lines a bit? :3 -nodnod-

For something done with a mouse, on MSpaint, this is pretty awesome. xD I've never done anything good. I also like how you draw eyes.

The hands, however, look like tentacles. You ought to work on that. The ear is a little too big as well.

MS Paint is difficult to use. I've seen some really good drawingson it though.

You did a great job. Drawing with a mouse can be a pain. I much prefer a paintbrush.

@yabuyabu: i havent really gotten how lighting affects a drawing yet. shading is one of my biggest things i need to work on. ><

@Dihydrogen Monoxide: thanks you! man, they do dont they? that's why i almost always cover them up.

@Sanctuary: thanks! using a mouse is hard work. ^o^

"I have added new arts to the first post!" Seki shouts out loud. She sits back, all the while munching on popcorn, waiting for the art critizes and critiquers to come.

For paint, it's pretty decent :]

I think that the shoulders shouldn't be so square. Shoulders tend to slant downward from the neck. Also, the hands are a given.. but you probably already knew that. I also think that the hips should be a bit wider, as well as her abdominal area. And her left leg looks like it's coming out of her crotch.
The sash is good, but I think you'd see a bit of the sash from behind her as well.
As for the face.. her face seems to be pointed one way, but her eyes are still drawn like the face is pointing forward. Perspective is a bit difficult, so don't worry about it right now. Also, the ears are either really low, or really big. Ears are usually positioned at level with the eyes.
The hair clip is similar to the eyes in that it doesn't fit with the perspective. It should probably be against the head, rather than looking straight. It almost seems like it's floating.
Oh, and.. what looks like a black wing balloon (I don't know what it is, really) looks fine, but the string wouldn't form down to her elbow like that unless she had it tapped to her underarm. The string (Again, I don't really know what it is, so this could be misinforming criticism) should probably just dangle straight down, unless it was wrapped around the arm.

Hope I helped D: No one likes a critic.

lol i like critics, as long as they have valid points and are being constructive. thanks!

cat fish mermaid

it was a contest entry on EternalNox during their summer event. ^^