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Old 07-18-2008, 12:53 AM

Wow, you have some beautiful new poetry. I like black and white, and whispering wind. Very good ^^

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Old 07-18-2008, 01:24 AM

^_^ aww thanks fu. I like your poems too, though I wish you wrote ones that were happier...

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Old 07-22-2008, 09:30 AM

Well..maybe when I am happy yeah?

hmm..your new poem.. I will guess like.. a river or a stream ^^"

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Old 07-22-2008, 10:32 AM

Larele was baffled by it xD she's not good with riddles... lol

I very very much so look forward to writing happy poems ^_^ You'll write really good ones someday I'm sure.

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Old 07-23-2008, 12:42 AM

are you saying my poems are bad? >_>

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Old 07-24-2008, 08:20 AM

I was referring to good happy poems... you write wonderfully... just... if you write a happy poem... that means you're happy... and that's a wonderful thing =)

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Old 07-28-2008, 07:32 AM

New poem Dancing Colors up, please comment =)

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Old 07-28-2008, 11:01 PM

It's like one of those poems you have to do for class, umm.. you've honestly done better. It's good for descriptive practicing though.

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Old 07-29-2008, 07:26 AM

Yeah... was really fun to write, though I couldn't think of any other kinds of colors.

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Old 07-29-2008, 05:54 PM

Hm.. Roygbiv ^^

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Old 08-11-2008, 05:27 AM

omg... 121 views... top veiws <3 yay!!! Now if only more people posted >.<

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Old 10-23-2008, 01:09 AM

Posted a riddle. Anyone want to take a guess or give advice?

On a side note... I'm amazed my poems are still on the front page. This forum is really slow...

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Old 11-23-2008, 11:05 PM

New poem up, Love Birds ^_^ (Inspired by my wonderful girlfriend <3)

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Old 01-16-2009, 07:03 AM

New poem "Searching". Any comments? Ideas? Thoughts? Anything missing?

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Old 01-20-2009, 02:22 AM

i like the one that you havent titled yet "Flames walking through water
Untouched by their vicious foe," it makes me think of magic. how its something thats imposible .

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Old 01-20-2009, 02:46 AM

Thanks ^_^ never thought of thinking of it as magic... that'll help title it =D

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Old 05-16-2009, 07:36 PM

New poem up... ^+^ a Haiku...

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Old 06-17-2009, 01:50 AM

New poem up. More of a playful poem about a metaphor, and a bit longer than I usually do.

Poem is about the Sun and the Moon ^_^

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Old 06-23-2009, 02:59 AM

Well-done love. <3

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Old 08-09-2009, 05:05 AM

Thanks sweety <3

New poem up, Haiku: Stars. Hope everyone likes it =)

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Old 08-13-2009, 10:55 AM

I think they're all very beautiful. :)

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#72
Old 08-18-2009, 02:55 PM

wow I loved all of them, I can't be a poet but I can write quotes to help ppl

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Old 09-11-2009, 09:04 PM

I love you..and your awesomely-unique poetry! <333333

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Old 09-11-2009, 09:36 PM

=3 thanks sweety ^^ >> << should update this...

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Old 09-11-2009, 11:06 PM

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=3 thanks sweety ^^ >> << should update this...
You're welcome. ^___^ ..and I'm so glad you like the scroll.
Yes..you should! XD ..I want to see new poetry from you too. ;)

 


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