Originally Posted by Kilia

yea there are some people that are like that and if i ever feel like your doing that to me i shall let you know >w< after all it is better to know then not know and keep doing it right?

haha okay! Feel free to tell me that you don't agree with the tips I give - I'm not always right XD far from it D: *still learning* XD

well then we can learn together lol while you teach me also lol

Originally Posted by Kilia

well then we can learn together lol while you teach me also lol

haha awesome :D that's the best way to learn :D

yesh yesh it is lol to learn on the go lol

Maria-Minamino: is this better?

Kilia: - I still see double pixels around the neck. I circled it all in grey....

For now, I would use just the darkest shade of red, shade 6, for the outline and shade the outline later



Here is an example:



doubling it makes it look too thick

okay i think this looks better then the one before

YES! That's what I'm talking about. NOW....on OUR right side....where the shirt goes from the shoulder to under the armpit...look really straight right now...try to round it out.

yea it took me a moment to realize i kept going up the neck instead of down it lol >w< i mean i kept seeing what you were talking about but i was going the wrong way with my edits until i looked at one of my other ones lol okay round out the right side got it lol

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okay i rounded it a bit more, do i just need to make it even more rounded? i mean i am doing it gradually so that way i don't over edit it

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oh wait now that i look at it i need to edit it some more

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okay so this looks better too me but idk

Okay - that looks better! The part that goes around the back of the neck doesn't look like it goes around the neck - looks like it just kind of stopped. I didn't know how to explain it other than drawing it out for you - hope you don't mind D:

ah i see what your talking about lol and that is okay with what you did now i see whatcha talking about i hadn't notice that before

Okay.

So we shall go from here....to begin talking about the shading. The lightsource is coming from the avvie's right (or our left) and slightly up. right now it doesn't appear there really IS a light source. Take a look at some of the T-shirts that mene has on here already to get some ideas on how to shade with the light source :) The pumpkin tee is good for a ref...I like that one :D

okay so the upper left is where the light source is coming from okay got it *runs off to work on it some more*

*can't wait to see it*

yesh i am working very very heard on it slowly but surely

Maria-Minamino: hows does this look?

oh i like this top

thank you hummy: i am still working on it with Maria's help lol

you're welcome, sweetie

xuvrette: gives good advice, too

Let Mariaria finish her lesson, then I will see what still could be improved.
Mixing in different advices made me lost. T__T

lol it is okay lol i think Maria is busy lol

she is for the next two weeks or so

but rettie will help as well

yep lol right now just trying to figure out the coloring on it

I'm sorry Kilia - I've been so busy D:
I will get this done on either Saturday or Sunday! <3

i wish i could help
everything looks really good to me, though