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Old 03-28-2007, 05:20 PM

Trust
Trust is like a porcilen doll.
Very loved but easily lost.
Once you gain you must take care.
For someday it might fall.
You may have the power to mend.
But its face will always be stainded

Stephanie Major
Copyright ©2007 Stephanie Elizabeth Major

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Old 03-28-2007, 07:18 PM

Hey, I like this one. Particularly the "Very loved but easily lost" part :)

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Old 03-28-2007, 09:24 PM

Very nice. :3 The words you used were to the point and the way you used them were smooth. Love it. 3.5/5 (It's very true as well.) :D

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Old 03-29-2007, 07:19 PM

thanks It has to be one of my favorite poems i have written^^

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Old 03-29-2007, 07:45 PM

It's a lovely poem and I agree with the message of it. Especially the end. Once trust is lost, while you can make amends, that's hard to forget.

 


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