hmmm why don't you politely ping them or ask them on thier profile

You could ask maria, she wont bite ^.^

on the tunic you need more definition on the neck.. it looks flat..

Thank you, Star! I shall dig these out of their folder and start trying to make it look more natural. Could you give any hints about how I could do so?

sorry hun.. maybe a small amount of shadding at one side.. to sort of make it look like its rounded.. um 'frown' maybe a slgihtly darker blue around the edges, not to dark mind but enough to outline the 'top' of the turtle neck.. um 'pounds head' i wanna find pictures to show you i just can't think of where to get them..

The shading has to look like it follows the curve of the neck and has dimension, is that what you're trying to say?

Originally Posted by Drakina

The shading has to look like it follows the curve of the neck and has dimension, is that what you're trying to say?

EXACTLY.. 'blinks' darn your good..

sorry im not a good drawer but i've seen enough art work to know what to do in shading..shadings the one thing i am fantastic at 'frown' which kinda stinks cause i WANT to draw people..i just can't always get it right..'sigh'

Um, I don't know about that... I just tried to re-word what you were saying so that I could make sure I understood...

It takes practice. Lots and lots of practice. Keep at it, and keep looking for constructive feedback, and you will get better!

meh.. maybe 'shakes head' i gotta buy a new sketch pad 'nods' oh hey i like your avi.. she loooks mega dangerous..

Not maybe. The saying 'Practice makes perfect' has merit.

Thank you, I decided to dress up for Halloween early.

I had an idea to do a fluffy tail, for those of us who want tails, but not the cat or fox ones. I'm thinking it'll be generic, could be seen as feline or lupine.