Porcelain Tears

My Porcelain tears,
flow oh so steadily clear,
Silenced by the years.

Ah a beautiful haiku. x3

But next time Onoko, please post in your old poetry thread. (Check the index). It is preferred that you post all your poems in one thread instead of making a new one.

Originally Posted by Seito

Ah a beautiful haiku. x3

But next time Onoko, please post in your old poetry thread. (Check the index). It is preferred that you post all your poems in one thread instead of making a new one.

Ah thank you Seito. owo

Yeah. . . I'm going to stick to this one for some reason. >w>;

Yumeh The Cat

Yumeh the cat pranced,
Like a falling ball of yarn,
She bounced with great glee.

Originally Posted by Onoko

Ah thank you Seito. owo

Yeah. . . I'm going to stick to this one for some reason. >w>;

You welcome. x3 Well just so long as you stick to one. xD *tries to keep the lit spot nice and clean*

*chases after Yumeh*

Ooh I like your work!
Very nice. Most haikus don't roll off the tongue.
Yours do, they must be either well practiced, or just lucky to do that!

I enjoyed them both, but try and be consistent with thinks like capital letters, particularly at the starts of stanzas. Either do it or don't, but don't go back and forth, it confuses the eye. The capital on porcelain in the first stanza of the first poem is particularly random. You have a lovely sense of music though, these read very nicely.

Thanks you guys. ^w^

I seem to have a compulsive disorder with capital letters. >w>;

Oh well, I have a binder full of poems that need to be placed here. owo

Three Exclaims

Objection!
She twirled around,
dancing to those lovely sounds.

Obbsession!
He played his violin,
in the name of Violetta,
his one and only whim.

Climax!
She danced on till that final strum,
jumped on toe,
the dance has only just begun.

Princess TuTu

One step at a time,
Princess TuTu soars with grace,
unlike Ahiru.

Lake of Despair

'Hal Omg Nu' she says,
As they float there endlessly,
He held onto her.

Lady Light

She held on tightly,
She was his warm guardian,
Like the light from lamps.

Haikus have never been my forte, but I can appreciate the art form. Your haikus flow nicely, keep it up! :D

I love your first two the most, Porcelain Tears and Yumeh the Cat. I don't quite understand Three Exclaims, but it flows so nicely, I just can't argue with it! *laughs* You certainly have a gift for graceful haikus ^.^

A Gestuture called Kindness

Her small gestuture lives,
in everyone's locked-up heart,
we sin and forgive.

Flawed Porcelain

I am not perfect,
Like a vase of porcelain,
I have many flaws.

Jullian

My dear Jullian,
I can not stay here for long,
For I move with time.

The Promise

And so from there on,
The cherry blossom tree lived,
Keeping her promise.

A world deceiving
This ugly yet beautiful world
Comes with hope and love



I wish that I were the rain
To be able to touch
Everyone


Beautiful at first
But the water is wade
and love fades away

Freedom

Years of solitude,
drives one to become insaine,
Onoko is back.

Black Cat

The hero can't breath,
Hollywood has exploded,
Due to the black cat.


Heart Shaped Glasses

These burning feelings,
Dig love onto her pale skin,
they just won't leave her.

Docter, Docter

The life-sick had asked,
How long do I have to live?
Just not long enough.

Science

Messing with nature,
Decoding the horrid truth,
Why must we know all?

Time & Age

Like an Oak sapling,
Continually changing,
Just a bit wiser.