In this forum i am going to be posting miscellaneous poetry whenever i have the urge to right my poems are not always happy and mainly deal with love or loss so please critique and share your opinions (i love debating people so this is a little warning)
by the way if anyone steals my poems and i find them else where my publisher will be after you all my work is copywriten specifically for me at some point or another and i would never steal anyone else's work i just hope others feel the same.

goodbye my love

tears stain this sun dried cheeks
watching the clock for weeks and weeks
nothing left for me to say
please come back to stay
the world tried to take you again
you name drowns me like rain
nothing can make me forget
i will never ever regret
you are the love of my life
you said that you would be my wife
one little fight went so far
now i don't know who you are
is there anywhere we can be?
a place alone with you and me!
rapped in judgment of the world
left in a love story untold

lost little girl

she never knows where she's going to go
trapped in this hell with no way out
stuck in a black abyss
everyone thinks her life is a miss
amnesia girl, sure why not
if you were me would you be forgot?
life is nothing but a game to you
step on your little girl
nothing can hid from you
an angry scorching red face of doom
death is no match for you
nothing else gives a damn
why is it too late for you
because this is who i am
your little girl is trapped all alone
lost in a world that is so cold
smacked and hit till shes broken down
your the one who brought her to your town
nowhere to turn
nothing to do
your little girl is dying
all thanks to you

in a faerie's lies

little girls laugh when you smile at them
giggling jokes with their friends
you excite them in ways they never knew
but they will never know your truth
hidden behind a candy sweet face
trapped is the mind with a fowl taste
nothing in life is easy to find
no one in life in excused from lies
but you carry on your beautiful way
make people forget about the shame
nothing to live for
but you don't give up
you take their hearts
and rip them up
but this is just a dream you say
nothing you do effects people this way
well like i said
people are filled with lies
all you want is to see them cry.

just your little Cinderella

trapped away from the world you love
wish you could fly high like a dove
chained to this life of Cinderella's dream
no one is coming to rescue me
just a little princess not looking for a prince
your little princess, ha, i laugh at this
stuck doing all you don't want to do
beaten down broken and abused
no faerie godmother to save me now
no one will ever come to help
i want a princess to take me away
a lovely princess is the only way
i thought she came a few times now
but she always leaves after a vow
taken by deaths cold hands
I've been left all alone again

honestly when it comes to step mothers i think Cinderella was lucky hers never tried to actually kill her, just make her miserable.

this forum is not specifically only for poems i would very much so appreciate critiquing as well, please harsh comments about my writing style and just anything you want to say are more than welcomed here. i want to hear all the negative, but of course if you like it then please say so.

i suppose i should put a new poem up lets see what i can make

foolish dreams

drained is the color from my world
lifeless and still my heart was fooled
you said you would be here until the end
you said that you would always be my friend
that was four years ago now
you left me and I'm sure you know how
although you were in my arms
although i saw the scars
i never said good bye to you
i didn't want it to be true
i miss you more then words can know
my heart strings dance like a yo-yo
Damian my love blessed be
my best friend rest in peace

ps this is not about a lover just my best friend who i watched die

this is some deep stuff. gratz

This is not nearly as deep as I would love to go, most people hate if you go too deep asking questions people are to afraid of to care. I am really glad that you posted thank you so much.

actual reality

my life has been brought to you by Pain'O'Romma!
my life has been brought, a strange new drama.
the pain inside is how i feel,
the pain you see is always real!
my life has a lot of antagonists.
one of them me.
if you keep watching you will see!
people always judge me.
they don't understand,
all they see is what's above the hand.
my life has been taken off the air!
my life has been taken off you don't care.
the network introduced a new partner for me.
my partner was sharp you see.
it caused great pain.
it forced me to tell you I'm fine!
you know that's not true,
you know that don't you.
one is too many,
a million is never enough!
i now bleed because of it,
i bleed to set me free.
people want me dead!
well soon you'll get your wish.
i am fading into the world,
i am becoming part of the earth.
i see you there when i am hurt.
a protest was made and now i am back!
no matter what i carry slack.
nothing changed,
i am still me today.
soon the day will come,
when i make my final mark!
the day will come,
there will be no more starts.
for now i am here.
what do you want?
my wrist is tame,
my leg is not;
elastics, knifes, compasses or needles.
it does not matter, but it hurts.
one more and i will quit.
one more and you win.
we both know one is wrong.
we both know this song!
one becomes two,
two becomes three.
now do you see?
I've tried to stop,
honest and true.
I've tried to stop,
all i need is you!
when you see me down the street,
i hope you realize I'm not neat;
blood, gore, cuts, pain.
these are things that don't go away.
it started with one,
now I've lost count!
every incision counts.
the pain is now.
don't ask how

i will forgive, but i wont forget

you've lied to me and let me down
you've broken smiles to make frowns
but no matter what is going wrong now
i always love you, don't always know how
i am never good enough for you
half the time i cannot be true
you can make mistakes all you would
but ill always love you as much as i could
so try your worst to bring me down
cause i love you even when i frown
somethings you've done i can never forget
I've told you this, but i have no regret
everyone bleeds and makes mistakes
i love you forever and that's all it takes
sometimes i may doubt and am afraid
it doesn't matter for your heart I'll invade
please know i wont ever forget
but ill always love you and wont regret

forget not

lest we forget those moments of old where the souls of our sisters had their stories untold the pain and the agony again and again until "it's" over there will never be an end. one life played out for all to see the scars on her body tell story's only to me but who is this girl trapped so harshly in the past just look behind you shes probably kissing your ass this girl is so scared to be who she is she hides from the world and forgets all her sins, but does she really or when shes alone do the tears stream down like like the rain wrecking the fun. no place to run nowhere to hide shes all alone and wants to cry so when you see this little girl tell her shes not alone for shes not the only one

take a look

take a look at the world
a look is deceiving
with one look nothing seems wrong
take a look at your soul
do you really know how you feel?
take a look in your heart
you will see a brand new start
take a look all around
do you see things now
take a look at the homeless
first opinion is they are worthless
but take a look once more
you see them there on the floor
they don't give up ever
take a look at the world
take a look and you see
take a look without me

against odds

Keep trying and be strong.
Stand up you're not wrong.
People say you are dead,
You don't need to go to bed.
You sit here dying,
And are still crying.
Against all odds you can win.
Take a look at the life you're in.
Pain will always go away.
You were born so you can stay.
So give me that knife.
Do not end your life

hide away

In my life i want to die
I sit all alone and i cry
Everyone has abandoned me
No one sees what i see

My life is gone, slipped away
My soul is here, don't make me stay.
My life is gone, slipped away
My soul is here, don't make me stay.

You don't know my pain
You only see you gain
Smile on my face
Is this a new race

My life is gone, slipped away
My soul is here, don't make me stay.
My life is gone, slipped away
My soul is here, don't make me stay.

Depression is my life
No longer needing a knife
Problems in the day
why do i stay

My life is gone, slipped away
My soul is here, don't make me stay.
My life is gone, slipped away

bippity poppity dont

Give me a new life away from the sharp knife bippity boppity don't! Help me to see the way to be bippity boppity don't.

Once upon a time there was a little girl. She was aware that the world is cruel. She tried her best at everything she did. Her faerie god mother never cam when she said, "I can't take this anymore. I need a way out. I can't take this anymore. Way too much doubt." Her step mom did what evil step moms do. She was too afraid to tell you, "I'm breathing in the distance, to my life now transparent."

Give me a new life away from the sharp knife bippity boppity don't! Help me to see the way to be bippity boppity don't.

She gave up on everything. People staring never see! Scares cover her lowly heart. All she wants is a brand new start. No one ever tried to help. (She finds a way out.) People find out and never weep. They see her lying on the street.

Give me a new life away from the sharp knife bippity boppity

true darkness

the night takes you by surprise,
sit and wait as you die.
the sky betrays you.
the razor stains are true!
the darkness fills the void.
all alone you feel annoyed!
truth is the world is dark.
truth is black as a mark!
the decay of my final day,
reaching up from the ground.
in my life i feel bound!
take me so i may go in dignity.
take me so i may die in liberty.
black as the world.
my soul is stained.

the end

all that is left is one more.
all that is left I'll hit the floor.
the bucket is beat!
the light is bright,
i see the end of my fight.
the end is coming near,
and now i see the fear.
black as night.
where is the light?
blood stains your hand.
together we most stand

you watch me die

you see me waiting here for you,
you see me wasting my life.
you see me pull out a knife.
i am still waiting,
still hoping you will come.
don't you know,
you're watching me end my life?
i see you in the distance,
you seem so far!
i see you lifted above par.
you see me here all alone.
you see me here and you know,
you watch me die!

shed a tear

a single tear is hard on you!
a single tear will see you through.
life is here, life is now.
the world is in fear.
there is so much doubt!
allow yourself to cry.
so shed a tear!
no need for goodbyes.
the light is gone.
the hearts are dark!
the night has won,
in this lonely fight.
blood is thicker then water!
but much easier shed.
a tear is hard to come by.
a drop of blood dead!
now do you see?
now let me be!
you say goodbye,
you say to cry.
a tear hurts!the blood murks!
now alone in this strive.
now alone to die!

say goodbye

With this knife there's one last strive.
The sharp blade will be my demise!
With one cut i say goodbye,
With a single slit my body die.

believe me i know this one i weak i was really depressed when i wrote it and was just like meh and out came four lines of utter bull. i think its kind of funny know though and it is great if you want to make fun of something.....

need to cry

heart broken need to cry
pain has invoked reason to die
missing joy love once gave
living life in such a way"
no one hears me crying out loud
i fake a smile to blend in the crowd
life has lost purpose without you
so to myself how can i be true
bleeding heart with out an end
no band aid can make this train bend
collision will occur any day
i sit and wait i am not afraid
so do your worst and take me now
i want to go you show me how

one more

one more and i will quit.
one more simple slit!
one more cry for help,
one more with not a soul around.
one more chance to care!
once more ignite the air.
one more and i may die.
one more please don't cry!
once more start a fight.
one more endless night!
one more chance at life.
one more rusty knife.
one more drop of blood!
one more fraud!
one more deed inside.
one more in the side.
once more start a fight.
one more endless night.

never again

A story so untold,
of a heart never bold!
There is a fear of dying,
never more a soul crying.
Never again see the day,
where i met my dismay!
Never again shed a light,
never escape this night.
Endless damnation,
true petrifaction.
A fear so untrue,
all alone without you.
The blade of death,
i shall meet my last rest.
Never again rust in you,
never again be untrue.
Plot is laid out,
now in a bloody drout!
A drop of blood shed once more,
a single drop found on the floor!

love a friend

i know you're my friend, so don't ask why.
i know you're my friend, but my heart does not lie!
i know nothing will happen,
i know your brave.
i also know you're not afraid to be you.
you don't like me that way,
i am fine with that.
please don't go away!
if our friendship died, i don't know what i would do,
but i know you're here through and through!